WARRIOR !

WARRIOR !

A Poem by Raghib
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In life we find a warrior within every one .

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Yes you do fail,
And you have been known for it .
A stardom achieved,
By the mistakes of a written destiny .
Yet you expect for remorse,
And you pray for it every night .
But even the shooting stars have shown,
A deaf ear to your pleadings .
You have been deprived of success,
And yet you are still working for it .
The staff of your belief ,
Never failing to make you rise again .
Yes you do fail,
For even the divine envies such warriors .

© 2018 Raghib


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Hmm..
A strong piece indeed.
The exaggerated ending gives the punch needed for the poem.
Good work!



Posted 6 Years Ago


Raghib

6 Years Ago

The last line is actually in reference to greek mythology. The gods in greek myths ARE envious of w.. read more
Zephyr

6 Years Ago

Got it Raghib:)
You have given a name to all those who try and fail repeatedly. I loved the way you have voiced their thoughts and showed them a positive way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Raghib

6 Years Ago

Thabk you Najam . It seems only two people are reviewing my poems . Thanks a lot for your support
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

It is my pleasure. No need to mention thanks.
so you get up and knock the dust off and start again,bring out that warrior

Posted 6 Years Ago


Raghib

6 Years Ago

Thabks wordman . Seems like only two of you are reviewing my poems . Means a lot

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Added on December 27, 2017
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