I'm nothing.

It's about love and fight between boy and girl

I'm nothing when you leave me,
I'm nothing when you broke me,
I'm nothing when you erase me,
I'm nothing.

I'm nothing when you hate me,
I'm nothing when you fight me,
I'm nothing when you hurt me,
I'm nothing.

Just come and talk to me,
And Dismiss the sarrow away,
Now look my eyes it says,
Without you I'm nothing.

Just sit down close to me,
And place your ear on my heart,
Now hear the voice it's says,
Without you I'm nothing.

I'm nothing when you offend me,
I'm nothing when you punish me,
I'm nothing.

Just come will go for walk,
And you put smile on my face,
Now see my face it's says,
Without you I'm nothing.

Just hug me and kiss me,
And happy will always be,
Now I see in your eyes it's says,
without me you're nothing.

Author's Note

hey guys read it and review me please.

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Amazing lyrical rhythm.
Intense and impassioned.

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Jazakallah tazeen ahamed. Assalamu alaikum.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Amen. Walekum assalam.

[Tony Jordan]

Those celestial highs come with some terrible lows but it is indicative of real passion I feel, in a relationship.
Without that passion there IS nothing.

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Yeah thats true. Thanks for the review.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

There is great emotional depth within your poetic words. They imply conflict, but at the same time offer a plea for reconciliation. There is no such thing as a perfect relationship. Work with your partner on any flaws that may be present in your relationship. Love and cherish your partner for who they are and the impact they have on you. Well penned my friend...

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Thanks for reading and review. I'll do better next time.

[Weeping willow]

Wonderfully expressed in so many ways I feel the words your poem speaks,sadness flows through it,leaking through the ink;-

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so happy.

[Sinbulvinter]

Wonderful job with this. I can see a lot of emotions and sadness here, that I unfortunately can relate to.
It's very sad when people get into toxic, verbally abusive relationships like this, and stay in them because they believe they're nothing without the other person.
Keep up the good work.

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Thank you very much for the review. 😍

[Sinbulvinter]

youre wekcome =]