A heart broken.

This is for the girl who broke my heart. I just want her to realized what am I feeling?

When your heart chooses a path, and you walk so far,

 nothing can turn you back from where you are. 

No pain, no scars can make you turn away,

 there's nothing that anyone can do nor say.

 You're scared, your hurting and the tears seem to never end,

 but you think in your mind "I would do it all again".

 For the little moments, that get you through the bad, 

For the few happy moments that get you through the sad.

 For the few laughs and smile, and the jokes and the care,

 that you wish so wholeheartedly would always be there. 

You'd try to make them happy in ever possible way, 

but it seems to worsen with every passing day.

 All you want is for them to hold you and let you know that they care, 

but no matter how hard you try, they don't, and it doesn't seem fair.

 Your whole heart now broken, you hope for a change, 

but you know somehow even through your prayers they will always be the same.

 Your love won't let you leave, and you continue to hope for the best, 

and pray every night that God will take care of the rest.

Author's Note

Your little appreciation and honest feedback make me write even more. A person who feels appreciated will always do more than expected.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'A heart broken'
rahul Bakolia,
A picture above of the intricate colors which are the feelings within your own unique hopes for this time of caring for another within the future. To hope is what is our help. We like to plan on something, to know it will have an expected end and your poem shows that we do not always have control of how things play out. I liked the thoughtful way you gave of showing a cause and effect style within this poem.Blessings,
Kathy

[Amada]

Thanks ma'am for your kind words. 😊 😊 😊

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

You painted the deep emotions very well. I'm sorry for what happened to you.
Nice writing!!!!!

[Amada]

Thnaks but no need for Sympathy.

[T.S. Sky]

I relate to this poem. Heart broken is the worst feeling.

[Amada]

Yep 😊😊😊

[A.G.]

Wow. This is such a beautiful poem that holds understanding and meaning. personal. thank you for sharing this awesome poem (:

[Riddhi]

There is a little correction I guess in the second line of 4th para there should be but no matter instead of but know matter..Actually this one seems to be a poem which will remain close to my heart as it is a so heart touching poem specially the 3rd and 4th para..And moreover , it had a rhyme scheme of abab..Most of the poems where a person tries to write about things like this where someone tries to pour down his emotions , they are mostly free verse poem..But you made it rhyming..I liked that...You know sometimes we actually think and care more about a person then they actually do for us..I am just being honest..When someone talks about something like love , the first question that pops up in my mind is how you actually know that you are in love..I am just telling my part not yours..They say that even ocks get impressions when continuosly water flows over them then its a human heart , if you love someone so deeply then one day that person understands it...To be honest , I don't know if this actually happens because I never experienced it..Actually I am perplexed to what to say to you , I will be happy if that girl realizes your true feelings one day , in fact that will be the most nice thing but I don't even want to give you a false assurance about that girl surely realizing it..I just want that what you want should happen and I will pray to god ( if he exists) that girl realizes it..Anyway , keep writing..As a writer , you are a great person indeed..You know I like those writers who write by their heart and not brain..And you are one among those..The way you express your feelings and emotions is worth appreciating...
Take care...

[Amada]

Sorry riddhi, I write in my mobile with android key board so sometimes, auto correction, smj gyi 😂😂😂😂

[Amada]

Well, I messaged you 😊

[Riddhi]

Hmm..I understood it...I actually use laptop and whenever I use mobile instead I do thousand more mistakes than you did!!!Well , I am happy to have a new friend here...

[Amada]

Me too. Seriusly

[¿]

Rahul, a person can have only one heart right?!
This one feels good that you're still praying for her...the fact that she'll realize is for sure...then the rest is left upon you...A good read here...thanks for sharing☺!

[Amada]

Heyyy... Thanks for reading when you review my peom I feel That I write something and by reading you fulfill my purpose of writing.
Thanks 😊😊😊

[¿]

Mmm....you're heartedly welcomed friend😊!I

[Amada]

I don't have words 😂

[¿]

But you've got blush!😊

[Amada]

😊😊😊😊😊😊