Numb

Numb

A Poem by RainDancer1997

   

 

     What can you do when you feel numb

 

    How can I laugh when I have no emotion

 

Feeling as though I'm stuck under someone's thumb

 

      I cant get in motion like the ocean

 

         Times telling me to move on

 

    Though life has me frozen in the past

 

         Even though my past is gone

 

        I've been declared an outcast

 

      They say time can heal anything

 

    But how can I heal when I cant feel

 

 When feeling numb is all I'm remembering

© 2013 RainDancer1997


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RainDancer1997
A lil poem don't know if its good or not?

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This is a good piece. It really pushes the emotions into the words. Numbness...that oppression of the past and the fitfull walk down memory lane, it serves a purpose for us humans. It gives us an opportunity to take a long look at what we've been through and find the learning lessons from the events, be them bad or good.
Remember that no matter how society pushes you, this way and that... you've always got the opportunity to turn your gaze upon new roads and begin a new path. Nothing wrong with change for the better.

Great Ink! Honest and expressionful.
Aaron

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That is exactly how I feel...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emotional and sincere. Numbness can be a safety mechanism. Nice drop. Thank you for posting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your emotions come through really well in this poem. It's hard to be patient for things to get better when you have been waiting for so long already. I know the feelings you describe in this piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

10 Years Ago

I've learned when one thing is taken out something better is put back in return:) I've felt numb but.. read more
Yes, it is good, in case you're still wondering. Thought-provoking and sad, but very interesting. Makes the reader answer the questions...OK so what if I was talking to myself! Still love it!

Thanks for the share

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It makes me sad. The past is hindering his/her future. This rings true for so many people unfortunately.

Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really profound piece..well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a great piece. I can relate much to this. Numbness...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good piece! There's a lot of feeling in there. It's a really heartfelt poem and I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Usually poems never spark my interest or make me feel anything. Usually poems never inspire me. Until I read this, I really connected with it. It made me feel like I'm not the only one traveling through this. Very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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RainDancer1997

10 Years Ago

I'm happy you could relate:) And no your not alone
Beautiful poem! Very heartfelt

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 25, 2013
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RainDancer1997
RainDancer1997

ragland, AL



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