Oh Zephyr

Oh Zephyr

A Poem by Raja Anjana Kothapalli

Oh Zephyr
As a merciful favour
To an awaiting soul
Drift this luscious savor
To half of my whole

Sundered by distance
Yet blended through hearts
Longing this fragrance
He is, on other end of world

Together, we rooted
These roses of amor
Please whisper my ardour
As you deliver its scent

Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love

Oh Zephyr
As a merciful favour
To an awaiting soul
Drift this luscious savor
To half of my whole

© Raja Anjana Kothapalli 2014

© 2015 Raja Anjana Kothapalli



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Raja Anjana Kothapalli
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Beautiful and sensitive journey into the thoughts and places of love.
"Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love "
The above lines were my favorite. Even with distance. Love should expand. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Coyote! I am very glad that you have enjoyed it! Your words of encouragement are very m.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. You are a amazing writer.
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote! That is very sweet of you! ☺



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Hi Raja,

It seems each time I visit you become sweeter and your journey in poetry delights the eyes of this reader.

Regards,
Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks you very much Al for your kind review!
Lovely poem! though it took me a little effort in getting along all the words, I'm contended that I didn't miss out this! Cheers :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Deepika!
I read it more than twice to understand finally I did I pray Zephyr brings to you the refreshing moments & those mild breezes you long for its just wonderful & the language too just got me engaged & attentive.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Benedict Mdluli, for your useful feedback.
Benedict Mdluli

2 Years Ago

Its absolutely a pleja really enjoyed.
Together, we rooted
These roses of amor
Please whisper my ardour
As you deliver its scent

Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love

These two stanzas makes it perfect poem. Its like "chitthi Aae hai" wala feeling. Most amazing poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Wow, "Chitthi aae hai" - that is sweet! Thanks a lot SSADD! I am very glad that you have enjoyed rea.. read more
Saddam

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear, It has special feelings.
very well crafted... good one

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Anurag!😀
Beautiful and sensitive journey into the thoughts and places of love.
"Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love "
The above lines were my favorite. Even with distance. Love should expand. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Coyote! I am very glad that you have enjoyed it! Your words of encouragement are very m.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. You are a amazing writer.
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote! That is very sweet of you! ☺

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Added on February 6, 2015
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Tags: poem, love, missyou, zephyr, soul, relationship, lover, wife, husband, life, distance, fragrance, amor, roses

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Raja Anjana Kothapalli
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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Hello, I am Raja Anjana Kothapalli. I am a writer in making. I love to write. But I also tend to make many mistakes as I am a beginner. So a feedback is always a welcome. Thank you, Raja Anj.. more..

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