Mom

Love you Mom!

Since my birth, you bore my burden.
No, no. Prior too, you were laden.

To claim my exsistence, I tore you apart.
No, no. Choose, you did, with rapt.

Whenever I cried, you woke up, late night.
No, no. 'Slept barely,' that is right.

You never uttered a word, as I fell down.
No, no. Except, 'stand on your own.'

Each and every time, I took you for granted.
No, no. You let it be, seldom you berated.

Venting frustration, I repeatedly ranted at you.
No, no. You always volunteered anew.

You saved me from my mistakes, me being your kin.
No, no. You covered me up, with your own skin.

Than chasing light, you often preferred shadow.
No, no. Lustre, you did, but in my glow.

Fulfilling my dreams, I went across the sea.
No, no. You let go, with your trust in me.

My happiness is what that matters the most.
No, no. To you, my health comes foremost.

I will love you, until my death, dearest mother.
No, no. Love, I shall, even after.

© Raja Anjana Kothapalli 2014

Author's Note

Thanks for reading! Kindly let me know how it is!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for your mother.
"I will love you, until my death, dearest mother.
No, no. Love, I shall, even after. "
Above lines are true. Love of our mother is never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot, Coyote! I really appreciate your feedback!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Excelent, Thank you these wondrful feelings about Mom.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank YOU for reading it and giving feedback!☺

[Deepika]

This one's excellent, comforting and awesomely rhythmic :)

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you Deepika!☺

[RomaJ]

Aww wonderful poem. It captures a mother's love for her children. Very heart warming.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you, RomaJ!☺

[Saddam]

My happiness is what that matters the most.
No, no. To you, my health comes foremost.

Beautiful write dear.......... For a mother, child come first. She never cares about own priority but child may happy. Great write dear.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you SSADD!☺

[Saddam]

You are most welcome dear friend.....