Seed to Tree & Tree to Seed : Nature's Cycle

Seed to Tree & Tree to Seed : Nature's Cycle

A Poem by Raja Anjana Kothapalli


Seed so wee
Chutes from high

On a spree
Routes to sky

Mighty huge tree
Shoots with vie

Tasty and free
Fruits plenty lie

As seasons three
Scoots and fly

Time turns key
Roots all die

The nature's plea
Boosts next try

Seed to tree
Tree to seed, aye

On and on, Glee-
The cycle goes by

© Raja Anjana Kothapalli 2014

© 2015 Raja Anjana Kothapalli



Author's Note

Raja Anjana Kothapalli
Thanks for reading! What do you think of it?

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I like the concept. It is a poetic idea but it seems choppy and sometimes awkward. For instance "Shoots with vie" or "Fruits plenty lie". "Time turns key - Roots all die" is beautiful and says just what you want but overall it seems forced. Perhaps you could rewrite this with the clearest meaning you can and no rhyme, then work with the meter to form a poem. I don't think you should give up on it. It is too good to leave it as it is.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Vishuddha, for your valuable feedback.



Reviews

I like the concept. It is a poetic idea but it seems choppy and sometimes awkward. For instance "Shoots with vie" or "Fruits plenty lie". "Time turns key - Roots all die" is beautiful and says just what you want but overall it seems forced. Perhaps you could rewrite this with the clearest meaning you can and no rhyme, then work with the meter to form a poem. I don't think you should give up on it. It is too good to leave it as it is.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Vishuddha, for your valuable feedback.
this tree reminds me of the one in the Garden of Eden...tree sprouts fruit, fruit is knowledge, that knowledge forbidden because we are better off not knowing---our innocence dies, the tree dies, but from us seeds for another tree grow.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Wow! You have a beautiful imagination! Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts, jacob erin-cilberto! .. read more
good read but i would suggest you to kindly clear the message in it.... the message seems somewhat hidden.... i hope you wont mind my words...but nevertheless its a nice poem :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you Anurag! No problem at all. But I did'nt get you! Have you meant the message as in the mean.. read more
Anurag

2 Years Ago

Yes...you wrote about the changing times and how seeds become trees and we get seeds from those tree.. read more
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

2 Years Ago

Thank you Anurag! What I meant to express is that life and death are a part of nature. Death after l.. read more

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

288 Views
3 Reviews
Added on February 6, 2015
Last Updated on February 6, 2015
Tags: poem, life, seed, tree, nature, season, sky, fruit, cycle, time, key, glee

Author

Raja Anjana Kothapalli
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



About
Hello, I am Raja Anjana Kothapalli. I am a writer in making. I love to write. But I also tend to make many mistakes as I am a beginner. So a feedback is always a welcome. Thank you, Raja Anj.. more..

Writing