Happy Birthday

Meeting someone special on her Birthday is just a different experience. Something which can't be missed out.

As I saw her for the first time,

I knew that she was born to be mine

In her Birthday dress she looked like a cute Dove,

I wanted her to Bathe in the Shower of my Love

Her shiny face was making her look like an Angel,

She looked more Beautiful in the Red colored Bangle

Chocolate was what she loved the most,

But for now she was somewhere lost

'Hey are you All right'

'Ya! I just want you to become my Life'

'The Sun can stop setting but I won't leave you, I Promise'

'That's so sweet of you! But I think something is Amiss'

I quickly understood what she wanted,

She wanted a Hug that's what my Heart chanted

I quickly took her in my Arms,

And, slowly-slowly adored her never ending Charm

In no meantime our Lips were glued to each other,

Like they did it in the Movie 'Haider'

Few min. later I started singing 'Happy Birthday' song,

She Blushed and I understood that I have formed a new Bond.

Author's Note

Here 'Haider' is the name of an Indian movie which is based on Shakespeare's play.

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Sweet piece. God bless :)

[Rajat malik]

Thanks Mitu :)

[Lydia Shutter]

The romance flows from every line of this write. How special to meet on her birthday! Lovely. Lydi**

[Rajat malik]

Oh!!! Thanks Lydi....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
so lovel dovey and mushy adorable poem...........
innocent honest heartfelt!!!!
very well rhymed.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Rajat malik]

Thanks again Pushkar......

[Pushkar Prabhat]

always a pleasure bhai..........!!!! :) :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write buddy! You got that romantic side shining through with these words :)

[Rajat malik]

Thanks Aaroon for your review and for lifting me up from ground.

[AaronFreitas]

No problem buddy :)

[Amber Lily]

Rajat this is great! It's sweet and mentions those crazy feelings we all get when we see someone we have a true passion for, good one! :)

[Rajat malik]

Thank you very much Cutie pie......Glad that you found it great.

[Kshitij Srivastava]

Hi Rajat.
A very positive and refreshing poem. You seem to be a hopeless romantic and am glad that you don't shy away from expressing it fully.
Like they did in Haider..haha...original
One thing I noticed...'In no meantime' should be 'In no time'
I liked reading it ....keep sharing your poetry. ☺

[Rajat malik]

Ya! Actually I Love Explaining Things.....thanks For Your Kind Review.....i Really Mean It by Heart

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and hopeful poem. I enjoyed the story and the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rajat malik]

I am glad That you Enjoyed It.....i Am Very much Happy from Me......feels like Dancing In The Rain

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and you are welcome.

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! The rhythm is WONDERFUL! I loved the story which this poem tell, it is very Heart-touching poetry. And Indeed it is LOVELY to meet someone special on their birthday!
Thanks for sharing!

[Rajat malik]

Thank you So Much my Cute And Lovely Friend, Dreamer......got Relaxed After Getting Your Review.....Know what Your Formula Of 1, 2, 3 worked......thank You Again

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe WOW I am really glad to hear this. I am very HAPPY for YOU! :) ^_^

[Rajat malik]

Me too ....and all This Happened Due To You....Thank You Dreamer From The Every Drop Of Blood Flowing In My Veins Or I Would say My Whole Body......

[Destiny Dreamer]

My Pleasure ^_^

[Cladine]

that's romantic ,my bad if I cant give you any advice or comment for this but I know this is pretty good. Keep it up.

[Rajat malik]

Thanks a lot....Cladine
Your review is enough

[R Smith]

very good poem Rajat, good flow and rhyme, excellent writing my friend :)

[Rajat malik]

Thank you Mr. Richard