Tryst with loss

Tryst with loss

A Poem by Rajkamal
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Does hiding necessarily means protecting and saving? Can you lose something which you always hide?

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From the deepest, and the darkest nook,
alleys and mazes of my thoughts,
Hidden  from facebook, 
Not allowed even in my dreams. 
I have hidden her from myself too.


Is she shameful or is she immoral?
Dogmatic, academic, eerie or fearful?
So tender, so nimble, that
the faintest touch.
Create tenacious memories.


Lest it can’t be stopped.
I am never looking,
yet I keep finding.
Right now, I am waiting.
Just to lose her,  forever.

© 2013 Rajkamal


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This was deep, had really nice structure and flow and good use of words. Stand out line for me would be "Is she shameful or is she immoral? Dogmatic, academic, eerie or fearful?" Say's a lot, lets the readers mind imagine exactly what kind of a persona the girl might have on the author. I like poems belonging to this kind of genre, the poignant / dark section of writing. Good job. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajkamal

11 Years Ago

Thanks. It was your comments that encouraged me to post further in this site. Thus as a gesture, I w.. read more
KeeD

11 Years Ago

:D indeed i'm glad you added to to give it that structural edge but it itself made such an integral .. read more



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Awesome :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


amazing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajkamal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the praise.
Dream Mistress

11 Years Ago

welcome
This was deep, had really nice structure and flow and good use of words. Stand out line for me would be "Is she shameful or is she immoral? Dogmatic, academic, eerie or fearful?" Say's a lot, lets the readers mind imagine exactly what kind of a persona the girl might have on the author. I like poems belonging to this kind of genre, the poignant / dark section of writing. Good job. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajkamal

11 Years Ago

Thanks. It was your comments that encouraged me to post further in this site. Thus as a gesture, I w.. read more
KeeD

11 Years Ago

:D indeed i'm glad you added to to give it that structural edge but it itself made such an integral .. read more

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Rajkamal
Rajkamal

Tezpur, Northeast India, India



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I am an occasional poet whose instigation to write comes from the progressive decay of humanity all around. more..

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