Alone in the rain...

Alone in the rain...

A Poem by Candle in the wind
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"how it feels alone in the rain" .....Came across this line in Rain's poem and it sparked of myriad emotions.

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If I am out on the terrace

Or prancing about in the lush green grass

Or just walking along a moutain path

Or strolling along the river bank

Alone in the rain

Getting drenched to the core

The shower on my face

The droplets glistening in my hair

I could be so happy

Humming a tune

Stretching out my palm to feel the pitter patter

Or I could be crying

The rain veiling my tears

Letting my pain flow out

Not caring about the shiver

Running along my spine

Or  I could be longing for someone

The rain inducing romantic delight

A wisp of my imagination

Or simply I would find a little poem

Budding in my mind

Writhing to be set free

 


© 2009 Candle in the wind



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Brings out the nostalgia through the beautifully crafted language.

"Alone in the rain
Getting drenched to the core
The shower on my face
The droplets glistening in my hair"---

the lines make me the feel of being in the rain... great..

After Elton John and Bernie Taupin, its you....... the candle in the wind..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great write on many dimensions on rain.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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awesome ...
Or simply I would find a little poem
Budding in my mind
Writhing to be set free .... loved these lines ..... a lot goes unsaid .....
keep up the great work ...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Brings out the nostalgia through the beautifully crafted language.

"Alone in the rain
Getting drenched to the core
The shower on my face
The droplets glistening in my hair"---

the lines make me the feel of being in the rain... great..

After Elton John and Bernie Taupin, its you....... the candle in the wind..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful. Each line adding to a outstanding ending to your poem. I like the flow and the story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I too love walking in the rain...A very lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem was written by you with such care and the emotions are right there and can be felt. I love the rain at times and who isn't tempted to splash in the puddles? I am always your friend--through the rain so you don't have to be alone. You bring such beauty--it's tangible and lovely. Wonderful!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the imagery in this piece. I too love being in the rain and have when happy, crying, playing, etc etc etc.
Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

now this is a perfect write ,u did with the raindrop what u failed to do with candle in the wind .made it about emotion thus bringing the write to life.peace wizthom

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is nothing more inspiring than the rain. It truly is something that can induce so many different feelings within us. You did a brilliant job at describing all the possibilities of what rain could mean to each one of us. For me rain is a driving force, screaming for a poem to be written
Loved this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rain...I have always loved it. Infact it does let out different emotions captured within us. It brings about someone else altogether in me....who loves to be set free, weave imaginations at a length and makes me want to live them....and may be for a moment i do live in that moment considering myself not a part of this world anymore.

This is lovely. The shades that you have added makes it perfect.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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