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rant poetry woo hoo

convulsing mood leads

only to the waking ache

of companionship

the frustration of longing

and a disappointing dream

Author's Note

Critique if you like. It's a rant poem, so not really something I plan to expand on.

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

I've been reading your poems all day...they have a slight taste of Edna St. Vincent Millay to me. I'm rather fond disappointing dream; they are always giving an excuse to conjure up more beautiful and disappointing dreams.

[Rana Adalwolfa Simon]

I don't have the words. What a compliment! St. Vincent Millay is one of my secret favorite poets. Thank you so much!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

She is one of my favorites as well ! :)

[nazia]

Well the rant is really cool. I like the way you rant. Expand it or not, it still opens the gate to many more thoughts and questions that demand answers :)

[Rana Adalwolfa Simon]

:) Thanks very much!