IMMORTAL: Reimagined

IMMORTAL: Reimagined

A Book by Random Peter
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The updated version of Immortal book tells us a life story about an otherkin teen boy who became a dragon in the unusual conditions. The story is mine and I own all the names. Chapters are comming!

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© 2013 Random Peter



Author's Note

Random Peter
Hello and greeting to all the readers, my name is Peter and I decided to reimagine my NOT that successful novel called "Immortal" where I used some names and basically it was a fan-fiction genre.
Now, forget about that stuff, this is my own creation, and I own all the names here. This is my own idea and I do not borrow anyone's reflections about the world and the life. Also the plot is mine too.

This book is written by my dream that showed up when I was 11 years old. Yea, now I am 16 and I was always thinking about it and trying to expand it and show how the hero develops in his life. I was not able to create my own concept, so I created an idea that the main hero might be inserted in the movie.
This did not work as I expected. The plot was killed and I did not know how to continue.

The introduction and the first chapter will not recieve a lot of fixing and tweaking. However chapter 2, 3, 4, and so on will be completely reimagined and recreated.
Hope you enjoy reading, thanks to everyone who reviewed me before and gave me advices how to improve my writing. All the advices were very sufficient, and incredibly useful.

Chapters will come probably once per week or two weeks.
Thanks,
~Peter

© 2009 - 2013 Petr Solovyev All rights reserved

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Sounds like a good introduction, Peter ! One such strong influence for my own novel comes from the author Max Rabinowitz and the journal he wrote about his time in the funny factory.

As for getting stuck on a plot - always ALWAYS refer to elements from your own life. I think one reason it's so easy for people in their 50s and 60s to write is cause they have that much more of a slate to work with.

And don't think that it's forbidden to borrow plots from any movies or cartoons you see, not to copy the entire thing, but little 'tributes' to them should be perfectly okay.

You'll get there - have confidence in yourself and you can accomplish anything. :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


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dw817

4 Years Ago

Looking forward to seeing it ! :7
Random Peter

4 Years Ago

Yep, now I am working on the second chapter. My new idea is that he enters the reality of his own mi.. read more
Random Peter

4 Years Ago

All the advises that I have recieved for the previous version helped me a lot



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⊰ℛℛ⊱
Sounds like a good introduction, Peter ! One such strong influence for my own novel comes from the author Max Rabinowitz and the journal he wrote about his time in the funny factory.

As for getting stuck on a plot - always ALWAYS refer to elements from your own life. I think one reason it's so easy for people in their 50s and 60s to write is cause they have that much more of a slate to work with.

And don't think that it's forbidden to borrow plots from any movies or cartoons you see, not to copy the entire thing, but little 'tributes' to them should be perfectly okay.

You'll get there - have confidence in yourself and you can accomplish anything. :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dw817

4 Years Ago

Looking forward to seeing it ! :7
Random Peter

4 Years Ago

Yep, now I am working on the second chapter. My new idea is that he enters the reality of his own mi.. read more
Random Peter

4 Years Ago

All the advises that I have recieved for the previous version helped me a lot

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