Dreadful darkness......

It was never a propitious flash of hope,

Everything seems to be dark that showed me a dreadful scenario.

Ever since you left me, I walked in silence carrying heavy heart

I turned back n saw, nevertheless thy love vanished and you departed.

I lost you moreover I lost for my part, everything is distracted.

 

My nights stretch no longer without you,

My heart now insane n life is in vain

Where do I find myself? Am lost in darkness,

Tears rolled off from sparkling eyes n all around I see hatredness.

Pain is so seldom, I faltered and shattered but you never came back,

I contemplated to overlook into colorful life, but all I could see was black.

I turned back and saw, you never came back….

 

Destiny was dark and I met scores of weird mind-set approaching me to seclusion,

So heartlessly you murdered and back stabbed my expectation.

I fell for you, lost in you, but what u gave me? Only woe

You betrayed me, but I set aside my vow

I lost thou moreover I lost for my part……

Oh no!!!! There’s no sigh of relief,

 Why didn’t you teach me to escape from this awful grief?

 

Hey!!! Did you notice my breath? It is shivering from fear,

There’s a frustrating and distress feeling that I can’t bear.

How will I come out of this, I don’t wanna be a pessimist,

But there’s no way to escape, heart is empty and loneliest,

I lost you moreover I lost for my part, soul is emptiest.

 

Reviews

[Tom]

A thoughtful, somber, reflection on the sad tale of betrayal and how the subject's world seems to collapse around that person as a result, self doubt and distrust of humanity the main factors.

A quality poem, the old English dialect thou/thy adds to the theme and charisma of the story line, splendid once more Vani !

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Tom, this one is very close to my feelings :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong description brought to life the desire to escape grief and sadness. I enjoyed the complete tale.
"Destiny was dark n I met scores of weird mind-set approaching me to seclusion,"
I like the about line the best. We can be forced into seclusion and hard to return to the place you started. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote