Monsters

This is how I truly feel, behind the smiles and laughter Im as dark as they can get.

Death, blood, carnage and war

This is what they're fighting for

My demons, my darkness, my inner hate

Are almost too much for me to take 

They are strong, they are fierce, they are ready to fight 

Terrifying beasts with a darkness of night

Gnashing teeth and shredding claws 

Bloodied fangs set in savage jaws

The embodiment of pain, suffering incarnate 

Inside me is just too full of hate 

Not one bit of light can penetrate a night

Darker than shadow, where nothing is right

Can I feel love? I know I feel pain

In my heart, in my brain

These monsters, these demons, these creatures from hell

From underworld once in my soul now dwell

No hope today, no hope for me

One day they will all see

My true colours, a wretched beast

Upon the world shall be released 

Reviews

[David the writer]

This made me smile. This is truly epic! This is a scary war scene. I can get how this is horror poetry, but it also describes an inner war of emotions too. Thank you for sharing

[Saurian Guardian]

Thank you :D

[David the writer]

No problem, brother ;)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[Westminster Abbey]

Wow, this is really good. I think we all have our monsters inside wanting to get out :)
100/100

[Saurian Guardian]

Thank you so much!

[Felecia]

There yeah go. Amazing once again. And now....I have reviewed it like I said I would muahahaha

[Saurian Guardian]

Thanks :)

[Felecia]

No problemo :D

[Soul Fire]

Very powerful and raw. DExcellent work,Very emotional. And even though you have this side to you, I love you all the same. (:

[Saurian Guardian]

Thank you so much luv :)

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome. (: I think you secretly seek forgiveness,refuge and peace..

[Saurian Guardian]

Yes

[Soul Fire]

I know you so well XD