Desires- To Be Born Again!

Greed has led to my death that wants to be born again!

A pull of magic,
What trap has the world set me in?
That I envy myself feeling full of sin,
My body, mind and soul sick,

To run away from these desires,
That pull me back the more I move away,
Oh God!Please Say!
Why do they haunt me?My Devils!

Incredible Pain,
With knowledge that I'm wrong,
My mind's call rang,
Trying to make me sane,

Why do I feel dead?
Still seeing my existence,
In just subsistence,
Without hatred or greed;

I want to kill me,
To be born again,
Dancing in God's Rain,
To get wet feeling free...

Author's Note

This is one poem that comes deep from my heart. Hope you liked it! :)

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

We humans are being destroyed by our own emotions. For emotions means both 'dead' and 'life' for humanity. These emotions are parasites who can grow inside our minds and heart. For they need a vessel in order to become existent in this world. Why are we so dependable on these emotions? They do more evil than good, for this world is slowly fading away. I really like this poem and it is very well written. It made me think about huge and complex concepts, for your poem's message was clear and interesting. You have talent, so you should never stop writing.

Good job :D

[Rainslover]

You got my point right! Desires that destroy one. I want to get rid of desires, but it's kinda tough with the kind of desire-filled environment you are around. They are all an illusion and till you are believing in illusion, the end will always be a broken heart and this end doesn't comes once, but so many times. Once you get happy, the next moment pain enters. It's a cycle of a cruel joke.

Thank you so much for taking insight in this and understanding it and for replying! :)

[Nightfeather]

No problem and you are right. We humans like to walk in our own painful cycles until the end of times take our lives away. The messages of your poems are so deep and I can reconnect with your poems, for the messages are to ignored by this world of us. You are now one of my favorite writers. When I have more time, I shall review all your poems. For you are one of the few writers I can really connect with. You are an epic writer :)

[Rainslover]

And I can reconnect with yours as if I'm reading my own words. And well you too, will def finish reading your poems whenever I get time. Thanks again and you are one too! :)

[Nightfeather]

Thank you my friend :D

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Keep it up!

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much! :)

[Bear]

Battling ones own demons, seeking the greater good in ones self, empowering the feel of rebirth to dance in Gods rain to get wet feeling free... Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap!
Well done My friend, your English is perfect in this one :~)

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much!!!:)