Not the person you're looking for.

Heartbreaker.

You're a good girl, all you ever wanted was someone who would always be there for you, not someone who's always running away. You wanted someone who'd find time to talk to you, not someone who's always busy.

You needed someone to watch the stars with at night, not to count them alone; waiting for him to call. You wanted someone who listens to your problems and try to come up with a solution, not someone who tells you everything will be okay.

You wanted someone to call you at night to make sure you're okay and safe, not someone who drowns you in tears on your pillow after a long night of yelling. You needed someone who's wishing to end up marrying you, not breaking you.

You wanted someone to love you as the way you deserve to be loved. But darling, He's not the person you're looking for.

-Rassoul

Author's Note

Tell your honest opinion about this.

Reviews

[duff]

Another job well done! Keep up the good work. You're on a roll. I like it.

[Rassoul]

Thanks Duff, I'm glad you liked this.

[duff]

You're welcome and I did for sure!

[barleygirl]

I very much love this message becuz of all the times I've watched people ignore the fact that they are trying to be with the wrong person & they are continually trying to change each other, which happens so often in life. I am a very independent person, never been married or had kids in my 60 years of life. Yet, men will try to make me conform to what they want in a woman, which is for me to be subservient & needy. It has driven me crazy all my life. You've nailed it so perfectly here, the way it can feel. I love your straightforward style. Sometimes people need to just tell it straight instead of putting on an act.

[Rassoul]

Your review is so appreciated, thank you so much.

[Alex Ware]

Sounds like something you should be telling the girl herself? Emotive stuff. :)

[Rassoul]

Yeah, sort of.

[Zephyr]

My honest opinion is that it is what every girl wants.
You portrayed it really well, Rassoul...
Keep it up!

[Rassoul]

Thanks Naat, I'm glad.

[Zephyr]

My pleasure..

[Nora]

I loved the way you showed the story so Attractive and simple

[Rassoul]

Thank you so much, glad you like it.

[Nora]

You're welcome :))

[Dave]

You're so right, love can't be a one way street. Love is a give and take undertaking. To only give and not receive, is not love. When this happens it's time to look elsewhere.

[Rassoul]

When this happens, it's time to leave.

Thanks for your review.

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is wonderful. i love the ending, so unexpected.

[Rassoul]

Thanks so much, glad you liked it.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is wonderful rassoul.....i loved each part of it and that's actually so true...a true feeling...awesome.

[Rassoul]

Thanks a lot, Wajiha.
your reviews are always appreciated.

[Rubein Geterminah]

It's amazing to fall in love with the one who will return your affections. But at times it's the opposite.
So the speaker in this story tells the broken hearted to take heart. That right one will come.

[Rassoul]

Yeah exactly.

[Rubein Geterminah]

Welcome dear

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good piece of work, very good story..i think it's hard to find someone who will exactly love you the same way as you do..sometimes it is one sided or sometimes couples struggle in relationship..i think this is what love is it shouldn't be perfect, if it is then it will be boring and nothing will be new to face or experience..

[Rassoul]

it shouldn't be perfect and it shouldn't be heartbreaking.

Thanks for your review, Farhan.