You're too fucked up to be loved.

You're too fucked up to be loved.

A Story by Rassoul
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to the dead soul of yours

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He used to sleep with an empty head, an empty mind, now he's sleeping with a head full of thoughts about you. 

You said you loved him, was it true? If it was, why is he living with a broken heart right now? Is because he trusted you, blindly.

He did everything he could do just to keep you around and you did everything you could to push him away. Oh boy, he's still here, fighting for your existance.

How many times did you break his heart? You're not even counting and he's still here; healing himself every single time just to be there for you. However, he had enough pain. He said living in pain with you is better than living happily without you but damn, he had enough.

He accepted you as who you are and he kept fighting for you but unfortunately, you were fighting against him; that's why he lost the war.

Go ahead and find someone else to love you as much as he did. But girl, you're too fucked up to be loved.

-Rassoul

© 2017 Rassoul



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well, damn. this hit me very hard, especially the last line. this is so sad and it's on a different side of things, a guys point of view which is not common. i love this

Posted 3 Months Ago


One sided relationships are always the worst. And its even worse when the significant other lets you believe that they love you or care about you. This isnt just based on girlfriend boyfriend relationships but also friendships between best friends.


Posted 4 Months Ago


Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Based on every single relationship.
Thanks for your review, Pia!
This reminds me of many one sided relationships where one participant dedicates themselves, one does not. Imbalance, imperfection with disaster written large. Self deception. Written with flourish and pathos.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much, John!
I really enjoyed this whole piece but I love the title. Right there you grab the readers attention. Well penned and vented. Good work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much Duff, comment appreciated.
duff

4 Months Ago

You're welcome Rassoul:)
Wow, its like you brought out the words that were dwelling in my heart!
Some people are too blind or too ignorant to see whats infront of them, to see the real you and what you would do for them because you love them more than anything, but hey we should take it as a great lesson to be learned and by doing so we will heal our selves.
Well wrote Rassoul!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your words, Joey!
Joey Nizz

4 Months Ago

Your welcome Rassoul :)
Rassoul - An indictment against those who would betray the gift of Love. Written with impact. Most enjoyed. Namyh

Posted 4 Months Ago


Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Namyh.
I think this is precisely what many might have felt when they were too fu*ked up to be loved too.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Yeah, including people we know.
Weird cause this felt like its something iv'e experienced, but iv'e never even been in love.. I just felt his pain and his hope and knew exactly how he felt and what he'd probably be doing the exact moment when I read it cause you wrote it so .. real I guess.. But anyways yay lovely poem you got there

Posted 4 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rassoul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading/reviewing it, appreciated!

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