Embrace Me

Embrace Me

A Poem by Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

In the middle of the darkest woods
In the silence of it's dark-ling deeps
Where the shadows weep, you embraced me
And the time became infinity.....

Fears became my symbol, branding skin
In the depths of every burnt out star
But in the silence, you embraced me
And the hope became infinity.....

My doubts deepen in darkness color
Forbidding it's light to shine
Memories locked up, you embraced me
And the dreams became infinity.....

Your strength is my shield of power
Your purpose is my sword to thrust
Fears now invisible, you embraced me
And the healing became infinity.....

© 2013 Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows



Author's Note

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows
Thank you to everyone who reviews this creation of mine! I humbly thank you for taking the time to read & review! You are reading a part of my soul! Poetry is my passion, it is part of who I am! I hope my poem can connect with your soul! So again...........

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"In the depths of every burnt out star
But in the silence, you embraced me
And the hope became infinity...." the depth of emotions in this piece is amazing. it shows us that in our darkest hour, hope can flare and just that little spark can last infinity. it's beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sonnie, I am humbled by your review and I am happy when a piece makes light into someone's.. read more



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you did a wonderful job on this emotional write I enjoyed the read

Posted 3 Years Ago


When embracing shadows come to call, are we not human after all?
As I read on the this canvas I see, a place in time we call infinity...

Nicely done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

"When embracing shadows come to call, are we not human after all? " Thank you Dream Weaver, I truly .. read more
Dream Weaver

3 Years Ago

Agreed, I couldn't of said it any better... :D
"In the depths of every burnt out star
But in the silence, you embraced me
And the hope became infinity...." the depth of emotions in this piece is amazing. it shows us that in our darkest hour, hope can flare and just that little spark can last infinity. it's beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sonnie, I am humbled by your review and I am happy when a piece makes light into someone's.. read more
I liked how the last line of each stanza connected your thoughts. It made the words flow easily. Your words are compassionate, warm and wonderful. You take us through the darkness and then show us the light is still there waiting if we see it and embrace it. Hope.....that is what it takes....and the faith of knowing there is always tomorrow. Well written. lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

One day at a time as one hope at a time.....there is always another moment which I take in every mom.. read more
And the Raven soars once again, on blackened wings, and shadowed eyes, yet smiling from the shadows, as she watches. I am happy to see your heart turn to writing once again, my friend. For this poem isn't all darkness, for which I am glad. By the way, as always, well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you as always you are too kind with your compliments..... :)
So much can happen withing the parameters of infinity...but the exquisiteness of hope is the propeller that helps us believe in it all. Your poem is powerful and inspirational.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Icelandicblue.....your words mean so much....never been told my work is inspiratio.. read more
I've missed reading your works dear friend... you ever write with so much compassion, and elegance.

There is hope, and a powerful message here. You embrace the dark, very well, so it becomes light...
And with this I mean nothing religious, out of my point of view, but you felt how to get out of the darkness... somehow, I loved this piece.

- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Wow thank you Elisa, you have always been so kind with your reviews and your words...as long as you .. read more

3 Years Ago

It was my honest pleasure, dear one, so were you, I never ever did forget you! always so attent!! ke.. read more
This is a truly truly beautiful piece ,the emotions are so deep.Thank you for sharing it is lovely:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya.....I want my readers to feel the emotion behind the words and with your review I be.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

That is the only way to write,from the heart.You are welcome:)
This is amazing. I came to see your profile and I am completely in awe. My favourite line was "My doubts deepen is darkness colour".

Truly amazing stuff :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you ProCoacoa....your review is appreciated.....I am happy that I can still connect with peopl.. read more

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