Label Me

Label Me

A Poem by Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows
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Reflection

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Flawed by your cruel design

Reasons being marked on my skin
Evil cradling me since infancy
No voice to explain within

 

Just tell me how you see me
Just tell me how I survive
A reflection all too familiar
Only being, but not alive

 

Imperfection, defected, failure
Hidden amongst my very brain
Showing only what you need to see
Keeping within our connected pain

 

Thorns of memories pierce my head
Shame strapped around my wrist
Nail me to the very cross I bare
You gawk at me while I resist

 

You don't need to truly bother
You don't need to truly be
You must be hidden & tamed
No more of this rejected debris

 

Damn you my true reflection
The fight is between us two
Why do you insist on torch-er
I bare my soul only to you

 

Go to sleep evil angel
I will accept what is to be
Now nail me to the label
The label you gave to me



© 2013 Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows



Author's Note

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows
Thank you to everyone who reviews this creation of mine! I humbly thank you for taking the time to read & review! You are reading a part of my soul! Poetry is my passion, it is part of who I am! I hope my poem can connect with your soul! So again...........


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sounds like you may be talking about someones father? perhaps yours? very deep and moving, but in a sense, i wouldn't want to hear it from my son or daughter......but i still think its great, and if a message is what you are aiming for, i think it would be a great one, a song........songs like this, hit it big.....like, landslide' from fleetwoodmac. hope my review doesnt offend you, its just poetry ya know, and you write well......keep it....k

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really like this and think you did a wonderful job

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is very well done, one of the best I've read on here :) great job kido

Posted 3 Years Ago


oh this is hauntingly beautiful piece of work.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow, so deep. Again, wonderful writing. You have such a beautiful way with words that it's hard to imagine you can write something so sad

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow it's kinda dark...but i like it anyway!
Thorns of memories pierce my head
Shame strapped around my wrist
Nail me to the very cross I bare
You gawk at me while I resist

This was my fave oart because it sounded very dramatc! great write! ^^




Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahhhhhhhhhhh very very BaNgN!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well written and moving, the message is clear what you are trying to send out and it leaves the reader feeling sorrow

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VERY well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like you may be talking about someones father? perhaps yours? very deep and moving, but in a sense, i wouldn't want to hear it from my son or daughter......but i still think its great, and if a message is what you are aiming for, i think it would be a great one, a song........songs like this, hit it big.....like, landslide' from fleetwoodmac. hope my review doesnt offend you, its just poetry ya know, and you write well......keep it....k

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows
Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

Ontario, Canada



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