Two Of Me

Two Of Me

A Poem by Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows
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This is my very first poem I wrote when I was 12....and yes this is part of my past!

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Wiping away the wet fog off the cloudy window
Glancing into a cruel world no longer that is mine
I see a little frail blue-eyed girl I once knew
As she prays hard to live in another quiet time

 

Stepping back not knowing why I am out here
Seeing the frail blue-eyed girl, lonely inside
Can she hear me call her name over and over
Does she know I see her praying by her bedside

 

What is she praying for, as she kneels by the bed
Is it the same prayer I prayed for as I lower my head
Does she feel the same way I did, as she lives everyday
Does she know he is standing there at the doorway

 

I raise my head to see the black evil enter her room
Knowing the horror she will endure all the night through
I feel the stinging pain, knowing what evil is doing to her
How can this be, when I am out here knowing it is true

 

The evil leaves the presence of this frail blue-eyed girl
As she raises her head with tears rolling down her cheeks
I realized she looked familiar through the soft flowing tears
Rubbing my eyes realizing it was I who had the same physiques

 

I was the little frail blue-eyed girl outside in the dark
Looking at my true self through the foggy cloudy window
After the cold horror of enduring another night of terror
My spirit follows the bright white light through the meadow


© 2013 Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows



Author's Note

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows
Thank you to everyone who reviews this creation of mine! I humbly thank you for taking the time to read & review! You are reading a part of my soul! Poetry is my passion, it is part of who I am! I hope my poem can connect with your soul! So again...........


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Terribly poignant glimpse through the eyes of a survivor. The horror inflicted upon children often times by those who are supposed to be protectors is beyond comprehension. You have written this with such heart breaking accuracy. Truly an amazing poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you A.M.S (Red)....your review humbled my soul....I have been told many times in the past with.. read more
redflutterby

4 Years Ago

I have a poem called "Abomination" on here that is about abuse and what survivors deal with. Please .. read more
Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you I will definitely read "Abomination" and also thank you for your kind words



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Children are such angels but the horrors they have to endure sometimes bring me to tears.Your poem is lovely as usual:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


These scars are seem fierce...and I know they will never truly go away. Whatever trauma came your way...it's awkward to say, but it makes you feel deeper...love harder...and stand stronger.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Just passing (flying) through
this valley of yours Raven Shadow ...
I haven't seen a single lily that grows
I have one that my Father gave me
A not so long ago.
Would you care for one or two ?


Posted 4 Years Ago


Terribly poignant glimpse through the eyes of a survivor. The horror inflicted upon children often times by those who are supposed to be protectors is beyond comprehension. You have written this with such heart breaking accuracy. Truly an amazing poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you A.M.S (Red)....your review humbled my soul....I have been told many times in the past with.. read more
redflutterby

4 Years Ago

I have a poem called "Abomination" on here that is about abuse and what survivors deal with. Please .. read more
Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you I will definitely read "Abomination" and also thank you for your kind words
This is a very dark and powerful poem. Great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you I truly appreciate the positive review
Written when you were 12? seriously, so good.... and profound my friend.
You were for sure a soul who felt and certainly beyond things... great poem full of
early young darkness within you, I like it though. You draw eerie pictures with your words.

Very well done!
- Elisa



Posted 4 Years Ago


Silent Serenity also known as Raven Shadows

4 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa, your words are very gentle and kind.....At 12 I didn't know I could write but I had.. read more

4 Years Ago

Yes, it is... I remember I wrote my first letter to someone, when I was four, under the table, (I ha.. read more
This is very saddening. it is also amazing that you wrote so well when you were only twelve! I guess a dark past can really do that to somebody. It's amazing how well you can explain your feelings in words, and how open you are with the world.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Spoken well through your words... an unfortunate happening that continues for many that are young

Posted 6 Years Ago


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loved this... its spledid..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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