God is everywhere

I have been seeing God in all places lately... :)

I see You in the trees.
I see you in the breeze.
I see you in the rain.
I see you in my pain.
I see you in the grass.
I see you in my past.
I see you in the light.
I see you in my life.
Everywhere I look I see your grace even in my beaming face.

Author's Note

It isn't my best but whatever! :)

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Hey, I haven't read this one before ^^ I like how it flows, my only suggestion would be to drop the last part of the last line down and it would flow even smoother. It is good to know that God is everywhere, the other day I was feeling really down and my family was driving down the road and a song came on saying "God I need you now" so I was singing along and all of a sudden this vibrant rainbow appeared outside and it almost looked like I could touch it, I took it as God sending that to me to cheer me up and I started crying and felt better ^^ lol

Great Job

[StayAnchored]

That is an amazing story!! Rainbows never fail at making me joyful!!
Thanks for the review! :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha yep I thought that was an amazing experience, just wish I had my camera with me xD and You're welcome

[Erik Daniel]

Wow. Simply amazing!!! Great job! One of the best poems I have read on this site!

[StayAnchored]

Wow! Um, thanks! You must not have read very many poems on here but thank you very much! :)

[Erik Daniel]

Ha. I'm serious. It is simple but powerful. Good job.

[StayAnchored]

I wrote this poem 2 years ago so getting 3 reviews in one day is amazing! Thanks again :)

[max_vonnegut]

This could be the most beautiful and awesome set of sentences ever written together!
This is amazing work ma'am. Awesome job!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so very much! You are too sweet! :D

[Hannah Jocks]

This is original and amazing. It truly sends out a message that god there with you every step of the way and always has. Beautiful and touching poem! (:

[StayAnchored]

Thank You!! :)

[luviva]

ohhh u r so ryt, GOD is omnipresent... en every where so those who sin thinking ohh yeah am in the dark no body is seeing me.. watch out coz he is present!!

[marie]

i like the repitition, not the best you could do, but still a good write:)

[StayAnchored]

I really appreciate your constructive criticism!! Thanks

[marie]

no problem, i aim to improve and inspire:)