The Snowman

The Snowman

A Poem by StayAnchored
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I felt inspired when I wrote this... It might be hard to get what I meant by this, but I don't care. :P

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The Snowman watches as the flakes fall.

The Snowman yells but no one calls.

The Snowman melts when it rains.

The Snowman is afraid of pain.

The Snowman is all alone, while you cuddle at your home.

Take time time to listen before you melt and tell other about what you've dealt.

You will realize we are all the same, the kid on the street and the man with no name.


© 2012 StayAnchored



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Nice Poem :) Short & sweet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
A very deep and thoughtful poem. Yes, I do indeed feel inspired.
lissalovesyou:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for all your reviews! I really needed some more positive(ness) in my life right .. read more
lissalovesyou

3 Years Ago

Same here. Just returning the favor, since you made me smile by entering these in my contest.
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A perspective I've never known... Such an empathetic write and I adore the moral.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
Random poem that has deep meaning. Bravo!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

4 Years Ago

Thanks again :)
I tend to be bad with "deep" things because I am hardly ever serious but this .. read more
Sir Joseph

4 Years Ago

I can tell! it is a really great poem!:)
Really good!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This is so sweet and sad at the same time. Too many good lines to quote, nicely done :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

Thanks :D
Silhouette

5 Years Ago

You're welcome ^.^
ohh what asweet and thoughtful poem
i get every single thing that you intended to put out there when writing this poem
the snow man is made en left out all lonely to the cruel weather as we cuddle infront of a hearth and still complain how cold it is. this is such great immagery and linking the idea to society it was so brave and clever!!
those people out there on the streets just imagine many lords have thousands of rooms in there houses bt they would never open their doors to that homeless person.
well written its such an educative yet detailed, simple and straight to the point.
loved it!1

Posted 5 Years Ago


StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! That is probably the sweetest/longest comment I have ever gotten! :D
hmm this is very interesting. It seems that the snowman mirrors people that are left behind and ignored after awhile. I really like the last line the best.

Great Job

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

That was exactly what I was trying to get across! Thanks for reviewing! :D
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

5 Years Ago

Well you did a good job then lol It also reminded me of the snowman that lost his head outside xD
StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

Haha! :D
A true and beautiful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

I adore getting kind reviews!! Thank you so much for taking time to read it! It Definitely wasn't my.. read more
Ethale Captor

5 Years Ago

I believe you, and it was nice.
great start,fifth line is a little iffy, but still a great write over all :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

5 Years Ago

I totally agree. Thank ya
marie

5 Years Ago

no prob :)

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Hey!! I'm not very good at the "About Me" thingys so I'll try my best. I am a teenage girl who loves poetry, photography, and having a good time! I love my God whole-heartily, so most of my posts w.. more..

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