Shine

Please read bellow! I can't fit my words here lol

The world is going down the wrong road
If we don't help it, it will be towed.

My heart cries out for the unborn child
Who wasn't wanted or given a chance
To laugh, smile, play or dance.

The single mother struggling to get by
Tears streaming from her big-blue eyes
She sings her children sweet lullabies
To make them sleep and dream of a world filled with peace.

Life is meant to be filled with the hope of a savior who loved all
And picks us up when we fall
So smile at everyone and show them love because you just might be enough
To make their day, change their year or even to face their terrible fear.

Author's Note

This poem was placed on my heart because the world is an evil place. If we aren't shining God's light in the darkness then we are basically condemning the rest of the world. So shine bright my bright beautiful flashlights!

Reviews

[lissalovesyou]

Beautiful wording. The title is perfect.
lissalovesyou:)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you!! :)

[Levi Levin]

Excellent poem. Good job Lillie:)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I really appreciate your kind reviews

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome:)

[Mary Christabel George]

I appreciate your efforts for voicing "the unborn child" and about "Mothers"
Your writing shows belief in God.
Good work.

[StayAnchored]

Thanks so much!

[Mary Christabel George]

Welcome always

[Chidoriflower]

There is a lot of good points in here: the wrong road, unborn children, single motherhood. It all wraps up into Jesus always being there for us. Good job!

[StayAnchored]

I totally agree! Thanks so much :)

[Chidoriflower]

:)

[Acer]

Package of emotions indeed. lovely write.

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I really appreciate your reviews!

[Acer]

My pleasure :-''),
i did love there few lines,

The single mother struggling to get by
Tears streaming from her big-blue eyes
She sings her children sweet lullabies
To make them sleep and dream of a world filled with peace.

really, these lines has it's own impact. Loved it indeed.

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I try to impact people with my poems :)

[Acer]

& i think you made it.

[marie]

great job!! i loved it:) this is so true for so many people thank you for sharing this with us:)

[StayAnchored]

Your so welcome and thank you! :D

[marie]

:) no problem i enjoyed reading it:)

[Silhouette]

Really deep and full of emotion…you did a really good job with this. Kudos to you! :)

[StayAnchored]

Thanks! I wanted this one to get my point across and I think I did lol

[Silhouette]

you did great, and you're welcome :)