The Flower

Interpret this as you like!

The flower stands straight and tall
I watch the petals gently fall

The petals float all around 
Hardly making any sound

The breeze carries them far away
Like my wishes that I always pray...

Reviews

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Beautiful and soothing! :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you for the review! :)

[Kieta!]

This is so beautiful, as usual! Great great job! :) :)

[Sydney Dreama]

I really love this piece of writing! Very sweet, simple.
It makes me think of the little prince a little!
very good! Keep up the good work!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[Raven Cedrone]

A symbolic piece, in my opinion showcasing love at it's finest in the first stanza and gradually fading away as the last stanza unfolds. Beautifully put Lillie.

~Raven

[StayAnchored]

Thank you so much, Raven! :)

[CreativeStroke]

I was picturing a daisy (like the 'she loves me' 'she loves me not' flower) as you described the petals in this poem. I loved it!
Very intricate and beautiful. :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it :)

[Riley Bray]

This is a very sweet poem, although I myself don't get much from it, perhaps because I don't feel I was really able to connect with much in it. Very nice!

[Riley Bray]

This is a very sweet poem, although I myself don't get much from it, perhaps because I don't feel I was really able to connect with much in it. Very nice!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you :)

[Silhouette]

Wow, short, incredibly sweet and beautiful...well done =)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! :D

[Silhouette]

You're welcome…oh, jeeze, I think it went into Marie's by accident…oops :3

[StayAnchored]

Haha! :)

[marie]

beautiful piece:) may God grant each of your wishes:) great job on this one it whispers to the heart:)

[StayAnchored]

Thank ya! :)

[marie]

No problem:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ this is very pretty, I can see pink cherry blossoms fly in the wind....though i do know that these are flowers on the ground and not tree blossoms xD yet it is still a pretty picture it creates in my mind lol

Good Job

[StayAnchored]

Thank you very much! :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're Welcome