My Wish This Valentine's Day

My Wish This Valentine's Day

A Poem by StayAnchored

Don’t go looking for love that you’ll never find,

 Start reading deeper between the lines

 

You won’t ever be ready to commit to a man

If you’re not actively working towards taking a stand

 

Your God writes to you straight from His heart

You just have to put the effort in on your part

 

Christ died on the cross to display His affection,

He is the only love that is the definition of perfection

 

The best card ever written, all filled up with love

Was sent by your Author from up above


So, write to Him this Valentine's Day

Trust me-it's better than any bouquet!




© 2016 StayAnchored



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Really, really nice. Enjoyed reading this 2 days after Valentine's day.

Correction: "Christ died on the cross to display his affection"- the h in his has to be capitalized.
Christ died on the cross to display His affection.

Other than that I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and for pointing my typo out! I can't believe I missed that... :)



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good gracious lillie you are just what i needed today. i think God drew me to my read requests for these! keep on writing faith poems you're awesome at them!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

1 Year Ago

Thanks, girlie!! I appreciate your review and am glad that my poem could brighten your day! :)
Great job! I know I am reading this a little late, ok, a lot late, but this was just fantastic! You make very good points, and I like the way you worded the rhymes! Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

1 Year Ago

Haha, its okay! Thank you for reading it; I appreciate it! :)
Jeremy Hiles

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome! :)
Really, really nice. Enjoyed reading this 2 days after Valentine's day.

Correction: "Christ died on the cross to display his affection"- the h in his has to be capitalized.
Christ died on the cross to display His affection.

Other than that I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and for pointing my typo out! I can't believe I missed that... :)

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Added on February 11, 2016
Last Updated on February 23, 2016
Tags: Jesus, Christ, Love, God, Valentine

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Hey!! I'm not very good at the "About Me" thingys so I'll try my best. I am a teenage girl who loves poetry, photography, and having a good time! I love my God whole-heartily, so most of my posts w.. more..

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