How to...

How to...

A Poem by StayAnchored
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My late-night prayer for a friend...

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God, You've placed these feelings in my heart
But I'm still unsure of how to start-

How to begin going your direction, 
how to achieve your definition of perfection

How to reach down and out,
how to show your love without a doubt

How to make him smile through the pain,
how to help You make him whole again

God, I really don't know where to begin,
just please bring healing to my dear friend.




© 2016 StayAnchored



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What a great poem, the rhyme and rhythm are very smooth! Just a lovely poem! And I hope your friend is alright! Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeremy Hiles

10 Months Ago

You're welcome!!! :D

Sorry I am commenting on this so late lol, I didn't see that yo.. read more
StayAnchored

10 Months Ago

You're perfectly fine! (to be honest, I had forgotten that I had posted it too xD)
Jeremy Hiles

10 Months Ago

haha thanks, my friend! XD
I like the rhythm and pacing of the poem, it's pretty nice. I hope your friend finds healing. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

10 Months Ago

Thank you very much for the review! He is definitely doing better! :)

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Hey!! I'm not very good at the "About Me" thingys so I'll try my best. I am a teenage girl who loves poetry, photography, and having a good time! I love my God whole-heartily, so most of my posts w.. more..

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