An Attempt At A One Line Poem....

I'm falling apart from the inside out

Author's Note

Be nice, I don't want any rude comments. So if you're only here to make rude comments then you can go else where. Thanks for reading(and reviewing if you do)! :) Have a great day! :D

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Sometimes... The single line can be the most profound of all!

This line made me think of something...

If the insides fell to that which is without
Then I'm sure that the "I"'s would certainly sprout!
Then not just one, two or three of you would you be
But a bunch of thy selves there in earnest, supporting thee!

I liked your line!

Hugs!
Wolfie

[[KL]]

Simple, yet effective and powerful. I like it =D
[M]

[Marilu Elizabeth]

best sentence evr lol