a rose for someone special

 a rose for you you need not ask why with a beauty so pure it captures my eyes my burning desire growing inside taking me over controlling my mind my heart now weak out of control ill offer it all even my soul for just one chance to never let go to hold you forever to be in your world  

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

great poem! i loved it!!!

[RayXor]

thank you very much :)

[olla]

I would have swooned.. she should have too..

[RayXor]

this is the poem i wrote for my girlfriend the day i asked her out 8 years ago.. it must have been a good one because were still together lol