My Best Friend

A True story that recently happened to me.I am dating this guy right now,he is my best friend and this is how I met him

It was a Sunday,

I went online,

I saw a status,

That I couldn't pass by.

It was a boy,

who lived nearby,

he wanted so badly,

to die.

I messaged him right away,

convincing this stranger, to live and to stay.

He accepted my explaination, 

and stayed.

The Tuesday,

I met him,

He took my breathe away.

We quickly fell for each other,

He became my best friend,

We were convinced it wasn't pretend.

 Wednesday,

he asked to kiss me,when He saw me the next day.

I agreed,I said okay.

That Thursday,

He leaned in to kiss me,

But I beat him to it.

I thought I blew it!

He liked it.

He kissed me again,

from that moment on,

We were no longer,

``Just friends''.

That Friday morning,

I left for the weekend..

He begged me to stay.

I missed him dearly,

but went anyway.

I saw him that next Tuesday,

He missed me so,

He invited me over for a little bit or so.

We fell in love a little more,

Day by Day.

I fell in love with the one I saved.

Now It's been a month since I saved his life,

and took away the knife.

Reviews

[Crysta]

I like this, although the flow could be edited a little, i like the ideas of going by the days, and i could feel the buildup of warmth you are presenting. It made me smile you messaged him.

" Wednesday,
he asked to kiss me,when He saw me the next day.
I agreed,I said okay."

would be better

Wednesday, he asked to kiss me,
when He saw me the next day.
I agreed, I said okay.

and one more suggestion,
``Just friends''.

"Just friends".

Thanks or the poem, I enjoyed it. Keep on truckin!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive story in the poem. Good to help another. I like how the story fell and the happiness that was create by one person being kind and helpful. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Soul Fire]

Thank you

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So love the format, day by day account that tells a lovely story....
that is so romantic too, superb indeed :)

[Soul Fire]

Thank you

[SmileBig :)]

Nice I like it :) flows well.