Swings

A poem about life

Smile as the breeze makes you sway,

Don't sweat the tiny things.

Don't let life's little worries stop you from soaring away.

Some people will try to knock you off,

But just tell them to screw off,

Don't let them get the best of you.

It's your life,

Your set of swings.

Don't let other people ruin your swing of things.

It's your life,

Your stride.

This is going to be a wild but worth while ride.

Hold on,

Get ready.

Keep your grip steady.

Up,Up and away,

Your life starts today.

Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

This is amazing. I love the imagery. I love to swing at the park with my ipod in and I love how you connect it to real life and living. The flying, rocking, back and forth motion is one of the most freeing feelings to me ever and in life the best thing we can be is ourselves and just live. :) This is an epic and magical masterpiece. A definite favorite. I feel honored to read it, friend.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you so much :)

[Lupus]

Inspirational. Really hit well on the "tell them to screw off". Well written with great content in such a small poem, perfect if my opinion means anything.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it (:

[RachelReaper]

this was a very uplifting poem bubbling positivity, I really like it. It was like a cool breeze of happiness caressing my soul... does that make sense?

[Soul Fire]

i get what you mean !thanks for the review! (:

[quinfinn]

a clever and unique way of looking at life and its changes, well done!

[Claire Twinn]

This poem seems to get better and pick up pace as it goes along-like life I guess.

[J. Viands]

I love it fun piece with an important message

[Soul Fire]

thanks

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Up,Up and away,

Your life starts today.
Loved that part! It's very true the poem! 100/100 Greatly done!

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much :D

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No prob! :)