Perfection

Society says alot of s**t.

I just hope you know that they're full of it.

You are perfect just the way you are.

Adding makeup,looking at your eyes,checking out your thighs,

believing their lies hurts you,little star.

You do not need to believe the lies they have convinced.

Even though stupid lies are so easily believed.

Society's view on perfection is unrealistic.

Don't listen to them.

They're sadistic.

Do not listen to them.

Your happiness is at stake.

Do not let them take it away.

You are beautiful,

inside and out.

One day you will figure that out. 

Perfection is imperfection.

Don't let them take your true self away from you.

Start being the true you today!

That they can never take away!

Author's Note

Hope my message comes across.(:

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

I love this poem and its great. u should check out my poem "Letter to keira KNightley" its a comedic version of this poem :)

yes society is crazy. Marylin Monroe would be consider fat if she was alive today. she was a beauty back then. she would be fat now. great piece

im glad im stuck in a starbucks in the rain so im forced to read my RRs :P

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much, I've already read your poem.

[Melobldnfr]

Xo. Good message! Xo.

[Soul Fire]

Thanks (:

[Felecia]

Very nice. I'm sure the message comes across to everyone. We all really need to see that we're beautiful, whether we're skinny or not. No one's perfect, and even society is flawed.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much,Fe. and yes, indeed.

[Barbara Walker]

Loud and clear and let's hope those who need to hear it, believe it! Words of truth!

[Soul Fire]

thank you (:

[True Henry]

Well enough, with a theme as generic as this one is. Straightforward and abrupt- which I like a lot- and I appreciate your distorted rhythm towards the end.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you.

[♪Barklight♪]

That's a really good peom, meaningfull.

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much

[Westminster Abbey]

Oh, your message definately came across. Give yourself a pat on the back, Free Spirit, this was awesome! 100/100

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much !!! :D

[Galaxy Blythe]

I love this poem

[Soul Fire]

thank you

[Destinyxi]

Extremely strong poem, loved it! :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much

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Totaly true and truly comes across! *Thumbs up everyone!* 100/100 Great message!

[Soul Fire]

thank you so much!

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you're welcome! :)