No longer

I feel like I'm drowning in my pain.

My throat is swelling up, trying to hold it in.

Just take it away.

My stomach feels empty,

But its full of knots.

Just take it all away.

My mind is going a mile a minute,

But I feel no thoughts,

Like my stomach, my mind is in knots.

Twisting and turning knots

My skin is crawling,

I feel naked and vulnerable around you.

You've hurt me too many times.

My heart is full of poorly sown patches,

Its bleeding out.

Old wounds re-opening.

My soul is torn apart,confused and hurt.

I feel lower than dirt.

My body is hiding its heartbeats,

Hoping you won't notice me,

That you won't hurt me again.

No.More.Pain.

Inside,

I'm crouching down,low towards the ground.

Hiding from your cold heart, and sharp blades.

Sharp blades.

I'm always on guard.

Always.

I'm gathering up my strength for the fight of my life.

I  may look weak now, but I'm getting stronger.

Stronger.

And when I'm ready, I'll stand a little taller, fight a little longer,

and show you that I am a victim no longer!

No longer!

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This has a lot of emotion in it. I think it's about a bad break up xD but usually that's me guess with most everything that's kinda like this lol I like how you repeated certain words, it's what people do when they are really upset, they say things over and over hoping they disappear...at least that's how I look at it.

Good Job

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for your review. :) Its really about the heartache my father has caused me, and he constantly causes me pain.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

ahhh I see...well I'm sorry to hear that and You're welcome.

[Anna]

I honestly hope this pain is no longer. Well written poem, I feel it was more as an expression than youre need for perfect spellling etc. This piece is raw, and honestly to write it takes courage as well. If you can get out, go.

"Rock bottom became the solid foundation on which I rebuilt my life. -JK Rowling"

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much very much appreciated (: It was hard to write this.i wrote from my heart

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much very much appreciated (: It was hard to write this.i wrote from my heart thank you

[Anna]

anytime hun :)