Lie To Me

Lie To Me

A Poem by Chan

Tell me you love me.

That you'll never leave me.

Lie to me.

 

Make me want you.

Make me believe that you want me too.

Lie to me.

 

Let me believe that you'll always be there.

That you'll always love me.

Lie to me.

 

Pretend that I'm your only one.

The one who holds your heart.

Lie to me.

 

Wipe my tears away when I cry.

Saying you hate to see me upset.

Lie to me.

 

Promise me forever.

Then rip it all away.

Finally truth.

 

Enjoy my tears.

And prey on my fears.

Finally truth.

 

Hurt me like no one ever has.

Leaving me broken and sad.

Finally truth.

 

How could I get the lies confused with the truth?

How could I be so blind by love for you?

© 2009 Chan


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I love this poem it is very deep and very real!

Posted 14 Years Ago


First thing that sticks out - your should be "you're". But aside from that, I feel like this was more of a self induced rant and it's no particularly something that stands out. The only thing I can walk away from this poem with is the consistent use of "lie to me", but it's because it was overly repetitive and didn't serve a purpose at the right place in the right time.

Posted 14 Years Ago


as they say, love is blind.
i love this write very much for i have been there for so long. blinded to everything. sadly i still am.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Chan
Chan

Pittsburgh, PA



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