Wonderlust

Wonderlust

A Chapter by Robin
"

California Koan

"

 

I walked

 

and I awakened

 

along the river of Kings

 

to a waterfall graced

 

by blazing stars and red maids

 

the end of the trail

 

with so much more

 

in this season of light

 

for me to explore

 

my heart accepting

 

the invitation 




© 2011 Robin



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funny how water has a way of awakening the heart. We live between two mountain creeks, the whole mountain is nested with slow and quick running streams. There is incredible energy coursing through every one. How could anyone one resist an invitation?

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Ok. Not everyone understands everything. Sorry I didn't get it. I am a beginner. I need to learn to read more between what is written. Going to heaven?

Posted 4 Years Ago


I always enjoy nature walks with you Robin.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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i make it a point always to accept invitations to exploration. especially when they come from rivers of royalty and un-followed trails.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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opening yourself to so much possibilities

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i awakened along the river of kings...nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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A vision of transpired hope. I can hear the flow of rapids calling back from the edge of the trail already traveled. Calm now the water runs as the sun dances off its reflected surface. This piece makes me want to skip rocks...

Great Write Robin!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 6 Years Ago


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ah wonderlust indeed! trails of kings and stars!! nice!

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feels like being lured away by Faeries :o) wonderful wordcrafting!

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This one feels like a fairy tale! I like the rhythm and visuals. It's really very beautiful.

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This is as light as a candle in the wind. Your ease of transforming a though process into delicate words is a gift, Robin.

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