Wonderlust

California Koan

 

I walked

 

and I awakened

 

along the river of Kings

 

to a waterfall graced

 

by blazing stars and red maids

 

the end of the trail

 

with so much more

 

in this season of light

 

for me to explore

 

my heart accepting

 

the invitation 

Reviews

[roarke]

funny how water has a way of awakening the heart. We live between two mountain creeks, the whole mountain is nested with slow and quick running streams. There is incredible energy coursing through every one. How could anyone one resist an invitation?

[Celeste21]

I always look forward to everything I read by you. There is magic you weave in your poetry. Your heart is saying: "Publish, Publish, Publish!!" Your gift is to be shared!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A royal place with red mermaids and blazing stars. ah, beautiful.
Would have gladly accepted the invitation.
I enjoyed every poem in this collection.

Chloe

[Tina Kline]

This has a very regal and grand tone to it. It gave me a vision of biblical times as I read it. Love it!

[the in between]

Are red maids mermaids? I loved it.

[just rose.]

effortless

[Lilly Negoi]

the river of Kings - sounds almost biblical :). have you ever seen Chao Phraya?

[Rossen]

graceful Regal Writing

[Arabdha]

i picture someone enamoured and entranced by the beauty of nature..though this is different,i'm somehow reminded of Ruskin Bond..may be its because he writes about nature and surroundings with such flawlessness..loved this one..

[C. Rose]

Such delicate imagery..."in this season of light..." from that moment on, especially entrancing, I dangled. ~ Rose

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct and splendid, vivid imagery. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha