Wonderlust

California Koan

 

I walked

 

and I awakened

 

along the river of Kings

 

to a waterfall graced

 

by blazing stars and red maids

 

the end of the trail

 

with so much more

 

in this season of light

 

for me to explore

 

my heart accepting

 

the invitation 

Reviews

[roarke]

funny how water has a way of awakening the heart. We live between two mountain creeks, the whole mountain is nested with slow and quick running streams. There is incredible energy coursing through every one. How could anyone one resist an invitation?

[Cherrie Palmer]

it is wonderful have the love of nature propels you to look just a little further and explore just a little longer, this was a perfect trip, I hope more people discover this poem.

[Sage]

i feel a soul about to burst and unravel some more hidden mysteries!! and so the next chapters begin....dun dundun

[Dream Weaver]

In brief; an effective but brilliant piece!
Niice!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful presentation of heart's pigments through the journey~

[Lori Carlson]

You are right.. our rivers seem very similar.. there is just something sensuous about water... any body of water. This chapter is filled with so much passion, dripping with desire, oozing with sexual tension and then the release.. accepting the invitation... most excellent write my dear friend.

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

What a beautiful picture you have painted here.........

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautiful descriptions. Spring sure does make us really appreciate the beauty of the world around us. This is the best part of life, to be able to enjoy the true gifts of the world...a winding path, trees and plants in bloom, a sweet bird song and a soft breeze. Not many things are better than that.

[Kerry O'Connor]

It's so important to accept Nature's invitation... it's how we keep in touch with our souls.

[Celeste21]

I always look forward to everything I read by you. There is magic you weave in your poetry. Your heart is saying: "Publish, Publish, Publish!!" Your gift is to be shared!