love that image, the sense of language, the poetry wrapping city colours 'flourescence' and 'neon' and the way this contrasts with 'reflections on black glass' (gorgeous image). this poem left me moving in different directions but i loved the poetic slant and the choice of words and image. stunning!
i wonder if it is not too late to contemplate and learn the meaning of the brush strokes...it takes the meditative patience of the lover of nature to absorb the meaning of those symbols...you seem to have found that peace
You have a gift of bringing the reader into your world... provoking the mind to reach the outer limits of the box that contains the mundane. I am enlightened by your mesmerizing view of Kanji...There is always a Brilliant theme illuminated in your work of Art. Brilliant write!
love that image, the sense of language, the poetry wrapping city colours 'flourescence' and 'neon' and the way this contrasts with 'reflections on black glass' (gorgeous image). this poem left me moving in different directions but i loved the poetic slant and the choice of words and image. stunning!
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I have to look up what Kanji is or who, but I am in awe. I have to really take a step because you are really amazing. I just started to click and like the trigger was pulled I have been blown away. Amazed. Now speechless.
no smoke blowing. You must read them to yourself and get a dose of how this makes one feel, step outside and look through the window, I don't think I am actually capable of speechless but rambling I can do:) Just perfect....
I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..