Rush

Prelude to now

connect the moments 

spirographical bio-arrhythmia 

spectral contrast , of what is and what is not 

brush stroke perspective 

it moves - always 

spinning 

these silky threads - 

viscous , sticky 

a chase to instinct 

formulated 

genetic  

ethereality and wonder ... 

                                   ( you are here )

copyright 2012 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

[writing mojo]

well said, to the tune of someone who knows how to connect from an open head, thought stream of conscience cooling these hot braided shades moving, words along alive by feeling which fray the flesh and commends the spirit, a created being coming back from writing dreams in such fine work as this ...amazing stuff

[Kenneth S.]

I'm beyond one with my shoe size on this one.

[Aidz]

Some dayz seem to much like this not today

[Psycho-delic Shawn]

spirographical bio-arrhythmia - who thinks of that?!!! Only you, birdie. Only you.
And if you hadn't used the words "sticky" and "viscous" the thought never would've came to mind while reading this. You write along the tip of the wind... just as you always have. Words constantly breathing... in search of a open mind to fill.

[ghostofdawn]

'( you are here )'

exactly where i was at that point in time. a lovely originality to this, i love that light touch...

[Robbie]

These silky threads connect us to the etheral world of wonders...Your mind is Fascinating my friend.... This is Magnificient! Thank you..yes, I am here. :)

[Elisa Laura]

Your soulmate is always within your own. As the richness is in your mind, of the one who you muses... all fits like the searched puzzle pieces.

[Lilly Negoi]

here and everywhere :) love the idea of "silky threads" in the context

[Bubo]

Yes!!I AM HERE.....Gorgeous words that flow inside.....lovely....hope many have arrived!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This piece has wonderful movement.
BTW, I still don't know where i am.
A pleasure, as ever.

[Ed Hart]

yes, thank you, i'm here, you be here too