oh, Lover.

oh, Lover.

A Poem by Nia
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The pain i feel today written in real time about toxic words in the air.

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The words i say are a plea for help with my sanity,

you say "whatever",

disregarding me.

My words are useless to you- figments of a bad imagination...

Meaningless- Compared to the anger in your hurtful tone.

Concerned with your point 

point by point you impale my heart creating a mess of my chest, my soul, my spirit.

some people will stop at nothing until you have no choice but to kneel at their feet

no stregnth left to fight 

DEFEAT.

© 2017 Nia



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A very sad situation indeed when love breaks down and there's no room for compromise.I really felt the hurt and aching heart (poor thing.
I'm sensing a hateful of hollow but all we need in life is a few hugs and kisses.
I can relate to this kind of situation and they say time heals old wounds but it's not true.Some wounds never heal perhaps of a memory you just can't erase when it's a good love gone bad.

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Smoking Man

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I understand where you are coming from and appreciate you sharing your experiences with the rest of .. read more
Nia

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Thank you for your caring advice, the poem was of how i felt in that time and now everything has bee.. read more
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A very sad situation indeed when love breaks down and there's no room for compromise.I really felt the hurt and aching heart (poor thing.
I'm sensing a hateful of hollow but all we need in life is a few hugs and kisses.
I can relate to this kind of situation and they say time heals old wounds but it's not true.Some wounds never heal perhaps of a memory you just can't erase when it's a good love gone bad.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Smoking Man

2 Weeks Ago

I understand where you are coming from and appreciate you sharing your experiences with the rest of .. read more
Nia

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your caring advice, the poem was of how i felt in that time and now everything has bee.. read more
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Toxic is a good word sweetie. I absolutely hate the word whatever and cause more fights between my liver and myself than money or parenting philosophies.

Always and with love

Jayden D.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Nia
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