Single Nights

Single Nights

A Poem by Livana Lowell
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a poem about being single

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Last night
I kissed a guy
and tasted vodka 
with a tinge of bar smoke
mesmerized by the way his eyes spoke.
I followed his sultry voice
outside where his hands found my hips
and I licked the freedom off his lips
the freedom in knowing I can forget his name,
in knowing he will forget mine
in knowing I could get lost in a good time
But we only kissed
and when he left, I smiled.
It felt good to be wild once in awhile.

© 2017 Livana Lowell



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Author's Note

Livana Lowell
trying to capture an interesting night.Inspired by Emily Dickinson's Wild Nights

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The last line should use "feels" instead of "felt".

It's very well written otherwise. It captures the exhilaration of being intimate with an attractive stranger quite well I do think.

Oh yeah, just one little thing for the sake of accuracy, the Dickinson poem you were inspired by is actually titled "Wild Nights! Wild Nights!".

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gracefully sensual.

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 2 Months Ago


Interesting take on being single and having no responsibilities, thus being free to roam. Flowing and thought provoking and descriptive piece.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Wonderfully done and loved the imagery. I have a few memories of such things. :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Very nicely done! I did a lot of club surfing in my day, but sadly I was always the wing man. It does indeed sound like an interesting evening. Keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Sam
This is exactly what to expect from alcohol....it describes the excuses we sometimes use to cover up our wrong doings...great going Livana!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Loved the imagery of this beautiful poem, what a great write , thanks for sharing, also I think everyone has had one of those nights at the club☺

Poeticme

Posted 10 Months Ago


I really liked this poem . the way you talk about being single from the side you don't usually hear

Posted 11 Months Ago


That could have ended in a night of passionate yet casual sex but I like how she refrains from doing so, instead finding a simple pleasure in kissing a man she doesn't know. An enjoyable read.

"and I licked the freedom off his lips" This line was very good but for some reason it also amused me by bringing a slight smile to my lips. It's somewhat funny but in a great way.

Overall it is quite good. Keep up the good work, Livana. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Very smooth and vivid. :)

Posted 12 Months Ago



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Added on January 8, 2017
Last Updated on October 29, 2017
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Livana Lowell
Livana Lowell

Huntsville, TX



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Sooo, hello guys! Not much to say about me. I've been a writer since I was in kindergarten. I used to write stories about dinosaurs surviving the meteor (my favorites ones usually lived) because I had.. more..

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