Your embrace.

My first poem. Bitter sweet.

Your hands,

Your breath,

Your body pressed to mine,

So close I can feel every line.

As your hand caresses my face,

To feel you is to feel the sun shine.

 

The blazing light on my face,

Is your warm hand.

The amazing heat,

Is your breath.

Your kiss could prolong death.

 

To never leave your sweet embrace,

It's like heaven.

My own heavenly place.

Your sweet kiss on my mouth.

Heaven is to feel you.

 

Awake.

Lost.

You are gone.

Awake at such a cost.

To loose your embrace.

Author's Note

Again from my old profile. A first poem of mine. I had to move it over! I just had to!

Reviews

[Scarlet Letter]

I really like this poem. It is so sweet and passionate at the beginning, and then the mood suddenly changes and you realize that it is just a dream and he is gone forever. Great job.