Necrobeast

Necrobeast

A Poem by DarkBreeze
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Really dark

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Laying in the street, sun gleaming on its back

An elder dog, about to give birth to a six pack

 

 

It knows the time is coming, it feels the urge

All of a sudden one puppy begins to surge

 

 

Half way out, then the air turns sour

A car is coming at 80 miles per hour

 

 

The rib cage crunches, the mother yelps

The puppy is free and is crying for help

 

 

Dust fills the air, the car speeds away

A hawk is overhead looking for prey

 

 

It spies the puppy, so young, so yum

And a new life is gone as quick as its come

 

 

The corpse lays in the heat, death fills the air

A homeless person finds the bundle of hair

 

 

Hes been lonely for far too long

Necrophilic and bestial? Who cares if its wrong?

 

 

Intestine as a condom, stomache acid as lube

The best place to f**k is the falopian tube

 

 

I watch in silence, why did my mom leave me here?

What is he chewing on? is that an ear?

 

 

This is not like preschool, where is the first aid kit?

But this is no skinned knee, and where is my blanket?

 

 

My father approached, with a shotgun in his hand

He yelled "Run away, or I'll shoot you where you stand!"

 

 

The weird guy ran away, but my dad was not here to play

My dad saw me in hiding and shot him anyway

 

 

Blood splattered onto the street

I felt tears start to run down my cheek

 

 

I wanted my mommy and I cried out her name

She came running and its my dad who got blamed

 

 

There was yelling and crying but mainly just from me

Then I heard a gunshot and my dad had killed thee

 

 

The dad had gone too far he knew, the girl he loved was dead

So he turned to the last living thing and blew off his head

 

His own son dead by his gun, but daddy was laughing the whole time

Because if your gonna throw your life away, you do it with a chime

 

 

He dragged the bodies to his car, their smell all too sweet

For he knew that in a few days its his tongue they will meet

© 2011 DarkBreeze


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DarkBreeze
I know I'm sick

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Rae
It's disturbing on a whole new level, but I really did like it. I think the whole insanity of it keeps you reading until the very end, where you find yourself digustede by the horrible scene you've just witnessed in your mind. I'd love to read more.(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanks for the reviews guys, I'll certainly write more. Any ideas for the topic I might try?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Disturbing and erratic yet lovely indeed. Your writing flows with undeniable beauty yet within it abides a dark brilliance. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh my. In a good way. I was able to picture the entirety of the scene and, albeit a bit aberrant, the disturbance kept me interested till the end. Good!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2011
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DarkBreeze
DarkBreeze

cave junction, OR



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I have lived in Oregon all of my life, I am a highschool student. I have been trying to write more to improve my skills, but I feel like I'm a creative person and hope to contribute to this community .. more..

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