You Make Me New

You Make Me New

A Poem by ReedWrite
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For Sas

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Your sense of humor…your sparkle…your laughter…

You make me smile.

 

Your joyous enthusiasm…your tenderness …your certainty…

You make me hope.

 
Your tireless commitment…your thoughtfulness…your promises…

You make me believe.

 

Your steadfast support…your adoration…your love…

  You make me new.


How beautiful is that?

  You make me new.


© 2017 ReedWrite



Author's Note

ReedWrite
I guess the lesson of this poem is...never lose hope...never stop believing...never say never. :)

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For one to touch you in these ways, where the cynic begins to believe that maybe there is hope after all, is priceless. It's what we all hope for in life and few get the chance to share life with such hope in our hearts.Beutifully penned.
ps.....your authors note is impressive, however in my head "to infinity and beyond" was added to the end.

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

So true, Nemo...and who knows what tomorrow brings? There is no guarantee anything is more than what.. read more
Lorry.

6 Months Ago

True. I mean, tomorrows keep us all going, but living today is way more fun:)



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never say never is right. my love returned and we're friends to end

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

1 Month Ago

That's something very special...so glad to hear that.
Thank you for the read and review, Roxa.. read more
Perhaps I missed something? It sounds like you are describing all the attributes you see, feel and most of all experience with the one you love.

It is incredibly beautiful!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

5 Months Ago

Thank you Dave.
Appreciate that you took time to read and comment.
Dave

5 Months Ago

No problem - I agree with you 100%. Love, if it is true, is to be shared and it seems like you do.
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Gee
Thank you, it is all part of the service. I am all things to many but I guess to you I am all.
So many women, so little time, more lead required ......

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

5 Months Ago

Sorry to be so transparent, Gee....I tried to keep it low key. I guess it's out now...oh well. If no.. read more
This is very well done & refreshing & thought-provoking. You've chosen characteristics that are both familiar & also some that are unexpected, which makes this very nice to imagine about the other person. The repetition of "You make me new" in the last two couplets really has the perfect impact of wondrous marveling about this awesome love/friendship. Great job!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

5 Months Ago

Thank you, barleygirl!
Taking a break from my usual dark love writing...so this was a stretc.. read more
This one is just lovely. Awesome.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

Thank you, James. Appreciate that you took time to stop in and read.
If he's reignited your spark. Don't let him go.
Actually, do you have time for writing poems. Go girl.


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

LOL...If he lights your spark, then how can you not write poetry? The feelings compel the pen in lov.. read more
to be influenced in such a way,to be,,,reborn,so to say,with another part of you,,you thought was lost,,,,is amazing. Very impressive,,, Keep it up:-)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

So very true, Sasquatch...and you phrase it perfectly. Feeling new again, through another human bein.. read more
For one to touch you in these ways, where the cynic begins to believe that maybe there is hope after all, is priceless. It's what we all hope for in life and few get the chance to share life with such hope in our hearts.Beutifully penned.
ps.....your authors note is impressive, however in my head "to infinity and beyond" was added to the end.

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

So true, Nemo...and who knows what tomorrow brings? There is no guarantee anything is more than what.. read more
Lorry.

6 Months Ago

True. I mean, tomorrows keep us all going, but living today is way more fun:)
Aloha ReedWrite this is a lovely read. There really are people who have that special thing about them that make us feel new beneath their gaze, touch and words. Beautiful hopeful message. Izzy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Izzy!
I appreciate your review and comments.
Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

You're welcome
The final couplet is a marvelous dawning moment that the reader shares - so very well conveyed. A glorious tribute Pam. Well penned.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Tony!
It means a lot that you would say that. Appreciate you taking time to read a.. read more

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