Please edit my novel

read the title

I cannot edit my novel for it is too personal, too honest. I feel like I’m looking at my soul and it feels good but to adjust it, to change it feels wrong. I need help and I don’t want to see the result. I have tried in this novel to capture life. I did not wish to express but rather recreate, to give meaning to our everyday lives and thoughts. I wanted to express that even the most mundane can have meaning, that the moments in between define who we are.

Reviews

[ValyrieKiennan]

Where can I edit your work? No text has been attached!

[RenatoRojo]

Alright I'll attach the first chapter. The novel is called in light of apathy, its finished I'm just having trouble rereading it because its too personal.