When The Time Comes

My long lost love letter that was never taken serious and personal.

 

You

 

When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

 

For You

 

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long

My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches

 

Just You

 

When There Is A Moment That I Have Been Long Dreaming About

The Ways We Once Were As For Our Happiness And Much More

You Are More Than Welcome To Have A Try And Give It A Shout

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compare To Any Of The Folklore

 

Only You

 

When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here

I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator

You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear

Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

 

All You

 

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On

There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises

All Of The Dreams Will Be Made And Will Come True For The Battles To Be Won

You Won't Be Forgotten, You Won't Be Alone, Otherwise You'll Be Sadly Missed

 

And That's How Much Of The Whole World I Think Of You...

 

Author's Note

Don't mind me, I just, I don't know, I guess it's safe to say that I was truly lovesick.

Reviews

[Amanda]

this is a beautiful poem, joe. it was nicely written and very emotional...to me, it seems you are promising what will be at each stage of your growing together and the relationship moving forward.

the person who you are lovesick over is a very lucky one! with luck and hopefulness, maybe this one person will see and be with you in this journey of love....

[Seriana]

Joe, this is like an outpouring of your heart, almost like a love letter. How sweet and touching. I can feel the emotion just spilling into my eyes as I read it. Lovesick is a wonderful way to be sometimes. The feelings are out of this world. This is beautiful, truly. :)

[Fallen_Immortal]

Wow. This is so romantic. I love how long every line is, so that the rhyming doesn't take away from the flow. It seems almost like prose because the lines are so long, and that's a good thing. It creates a wonderful effect that makes me want to read it again and again.

[alyssafree]

It really is beautiful.

[Angel Baby]

Very emotional write you have penned, so heartfelt and bursting full of love. Well done, found it a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. P.W.

[*Rain*]

Your words are your thoughts, pure and un-adulterated. That's true poetry. And lovesick is an ok place to be sometimes. It'll serve its purpose. By the way, the picture you have.....where did you find it?!?! It's one of my all time favorites, and I have been looking for it for a long time!!!!

[melpomene:[muse of trag..]

lovesickness ~ a malady many would like to have. you captured it in each frame very well, growing and moving along. the promise made to always be there is a beautiful one, great spill of emotion...XO

[Flame DM]

amazing piece! I read this and felt all teary eyed inside wondering if there was a guy who felt that way for every girl in the world. Whoever this is about is a very very lucky person. NOt good with words, or to over praise it but this was amazing!

Flame

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

Great write... I enjoyed it, it took me on an emotional trip which I have long forgotten... Look forward to reading more.

[The Viking]

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this one sooner. It's very heartfelt. There's a couple grammatical errors, but I know what the hell you're talking about in the poem, so I won't dwell on that. This person truly meant everything to the narrator of this poem for them to evoke this much feeling in them. My favorite lines were here:

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compares To Any Of The Folklore

Creative words and flowing soothing lines. Very nice.

[Angel's Lady]

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On -- Wouldn't that be great?
There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises -- Wonderful!

Very beautifully written, Joe! Such a sweet poet you are...