Before You Say Good Bye

Just needed to write the pain out.

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

There's Something I Want You To Try

 

Just Tell Me Something Important To My Face

 

That Way There Won't Be Any Surprising Traces

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

Don't Give Me Any More Of The Lies

 

Just Tell Me Nothing But The Truth

 

Otherwise There Will Be No Truce

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

I Want You To Look Into My Eyes

 

And Tell Me What You Had In Mind

 

Then I'll Understand And Will Be Kind

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

I Promised Myself Not To Cry

 

I Will Be Still And Listen To Your Farewell

 

And I Will Wish You Nothing But Well

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

Before You Decide To Look At The Sky

 

Before We Go Apart And Be On Our Ways

 

Aren't You Going To Wish Me A Happy Birthday?

 

 

 

Good Day

 

Good Night

 

Good Luck

 

And

 

Good Bye

 

Author's Note

No need to leave me any reviews.

Reviews

[Steven Pottle]

I know you said no need to write, but I felt the need to say something...

Just beautifully painful and confused at what is happening- opening each section with, "Before You Say Good Bye' just completely breaks my heart, that and the lines:

"I Want You To Look Into My Eyes
And Tell Me What You Had In Mind"

Hope writing the piece helped and thank you for sharing.

[Ahmad Alhour]

It makes recall some events in my life!
It was extremely touching, specially when you LIVE this poem...

[~Mary Ann~]

Not leaving a review... just a hug.. :)

[chloe cruz]

Well you deserve reviews.

This was a really beautiful poem, sad, and heartfelt beyond reason.

Great job!





Before You Say Good Bye



Don't Give Me Any More Of The Lies



Just Tell Me Nothing But The Truth



Otherwise There Will Be No Truce



Breathtaking.

[darkgurl]

WOW! This is so aweosme Joe, I like this write alot i can feel the emotion, a very powerful write.

[Säde Ryder]

A very good poem about a wretched event.

[Cassandra]

I feel for ya dude. I'm starting to realize that writing might me the only way to expel the pain. This one was full of it .. hope it made you feel a lil bit better.

[Angel's Lady]

Happy Birthday, Joe.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

I'm so sorry it went that way,
sometimes, the one you love so strongly can
be so mean as to not even say goodbye,
or hold a truce, :(
---mishel :S