Incomplete Skating Saga

There was that one night.

 

 

Somewhere In The Bleak Shadow, She Skated

 

She Started Out Roughly From Being Drunk

 

Yet, She Managed To Keep Her Balance Well

 

About To Cashed Her Soul In As Her Heart Sunk

 

Desperate For Answers While Her Mind Raked

 

 

 

~ She Didn't Use The Skateboard To Skate Upon ~

 

 

 

Roamed Around Madly For More Of The Drinks

 

As She Was Still Seeking For The True Words

 

While Her Mind Was Getting Plunged Into Hell

 

Slowly Ripping Her Spirit Away From The World

 

Her Life Was Nearly Extinct At Halfway By Brink

 

 

 

~ She Didn't Use The Roller Skates To Skate Upon ~

 

 

 

She Began To Skate At The Slower Speed Rate

 

Slow Enough To Leave The Skating Trials Exposed

 

Each Of Her Heartbeats Had Many Stories To Tell

 

Her Arms Were Getting Tired From Being Posed

 

She Was Deciding To Leave The Rest Up To Fate

 

 

 

~ She Didn't Use The Ice Skates To Skate Upon ~

 

 

 

As Her Long Lost Angel, I've Watched Helpless

 

I've Begged Her To Stop, But She Didn't Hear Me

 

She Finally Stopped, Stood Still, And Then She Fell

 

She Cried Hard Enough That Made Her Tears Bleed

 

At Least She Didn't Die, She Passed Out Senseless

 

 

 

~ Around Her Arms, She Used The Razors To Skate Upon ~

 

 

Author's Note

I was honored that she shared her pain with me, yet at the same time, I was horrified to witness her actions. But, she's better now and that night inspired me to write this piece for her.

Reviews

[Michelle Lea]

Wow, wow, that is so deep and really hits home with me in so many ways... this part in particular "~ She Didn't Use The Ice Skates To Skate Upon ~". I see her not living out her dreams, letting the bad things take over and engulfing her up into nothingness. Awesome write Joseph - Michael (:

[Sean M. Addams]

wow!!! this was a very deep and very well expressed piece ...i thought you did a great job on this... kind of thought provoking to me!!!