"She, and her story"

Its just a ramdom thought...

Hopeless lady of confusion,
Keeps changing her discussion,
Not at all reliable,
But for sure not forgettable.
'Cause every one loves her,
And few of them hates her,
She make every one's world upside down,
They all are slaves and thus are bound,
With the chains of misery and sorrow,
Treated 'em always as a poor sparrow.
She's broken the trust,
Been so angelic to them at first,
But turned into an evil ,
With the green horns of devil.
Self obsessed and self lover,
Back stabs the admirers with a dagger
Woman not worth of loving,
In the heart the pride is bubbling.
Sucks all the blood out of them,
Without fear and without any shame,
Smiles till the time she is happy,
Lil worries on her way, makes thing shabby.
Their tears touch her feet,
Yet, continues the same work and deed,
She is partially habitual to betray,
No regrets and no confession's ray.
Dreaming about the high things in life,
Blindly in a miry clay, she dives.
Finds herself in chamber of darkness,
Burden is her beauty, lovers are her Stress.
Eventually she falls very low,
Tries her best to come out but she is very slow,
Its too late to revive,
All she could get is unfortunate vibe.
Finally all she want is peace,
And keep her soul at ease,
But all she could fine is hollowness,
As her body, mind & heart is in distress.
A divine power she needs at this juncture
Love which humans can never measure.

Author's Note

Help me with your comments to improve... Thanks

Reviews

[Aziz Luther]

Nice poem, its amazing I just got done thinking of a girl I once knew with similar characteristics and read this poem and the similarities are strikingly similar. Thanks for that

[Day Dreamer]

Thankyou very much Aziz Luther.... I really appreciate your time for reading and commenting on it...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Eventually she is fallen very low,
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Eventually she falls very low,
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Love which human can never measure.
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Love which humans can never measure.


I LIKED THE THEME...AS I CONTINUED THE ENDING SEEM TO FADE...MAY BE I WANTED TO SEE A RESOLUTION COME OF IT ALL...THE BEGINNING GOT ME GOING AND THE MIDDLE ALSO...AS YOU DESCRIBE HER IN A DESPICABLE WAY...SHE IS TO OTHERS...TO GET WHAT SHE NEEDS...IN THE ENDING SHE WANTS REDEMPTION BUT STILL CAN NOT COME TO GRIP WITH IT OR IS IT HUMANLY POSSIBLE...

[Day Dreamer]

Thanks a lot Glean....
The ending doesn't give us the ray of redemption.
She still waits for the saviour... Its not much a happy
Poem as it deals with the plight... I hope it makes sense to you.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

YOU'RE WELCOME...I LIKED THE READ...I WAS JUST EXPECTING MORE IN THE END LINES...THAT'S ALL...

[Day Dreamer]

Yeah I understand, you wanted to see that spark, something satisfying.
However the poem ends in this note.. I'll try to improve in it, Glean.. Thanks for reading and helping me to keep the tempo high..