Once

Once

A Poem by Revery
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I dedicate this to The Beautiful Miss Mary Beth, my lover, my wife.

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The distance between my thoughts
led to a subtle place

In a trance 
dancing with words
and expressing the
delicate allure of passion

The piercing strength
of one tender touch

A single touch
between you and I

But Love

This is every touch
between you and I



© 2014 Revery



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The cunning juxtaposition of "piercing" with "tender" says more than either could say alone. This speaks with such magnificent simplicity of the paradox that is Love. Well said, Sir!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Revery

3 Years Ago

Thank you Mark, your review is very thoughful
Have you shown this to your wife? It's so beautifully written and thoughtful! Wonderful job, though I'm sure you already knew that :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Revery

3 Years Ago

My wife loved it. Thank you
Sounds like you're still in love with your wife, how wonderful ~

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

yes, I am. Thank you
Concise....expressing deep emotions in a way that makes them new, not cliche at all. The photo is stunning and the sentiment is touching. I am sure your wife was thrilled with this one. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

She was Lydi, thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Beautiful Dedication, Revery (Wonderful)

Revery - Your Photography are words beyond poetry written (Keep shooting, never stop)

Never stop loving your wife. Thank You For Sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Dye
What a beautiful dedication. Your wife had to have been in complete awe when she read this. I love meeting other people who are in love as deeply as myself. With a passion that runs deep. Very sweet and touching to read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Dye. I am truly blessed and should always remember that.
Ahhh, there is so much beauty in a simple touch, in simple words. This piece is delicate and rich like the picture of the leaves you post with it. I often wonder, if more than poets stop and revel in such simple things:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

No, only poets. Thank you for your review. :)
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Aya
beautiful and heartfelt

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Aya. :)
It is a wonderful feeling to read the Love between two remarkable people. The simplicity gives such strength in the message as Love should be simple even though it is the most complicated emotion we feel. The tenderness of your words caress her and it feels my heart with joy to witness such lasting, timeless love....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

We completed each others reviews at the same moment. I think that's a sign about our spiritual conn.. read more
Priscilla Sayers

4 Years Ago

LOL! I know that was awesome! Love to you! Stay connected! :)
AAAAWWWWW.... SUCH A LUCKY LADY!! ((so sweet))

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear. So nice to see you back around. :)

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Added on August 23, 2012
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I am a technical writing by profession. I'm in my mid-forties and married with three wonderful children. My poetry deals with the struggles and contrasts between the spiritual and the sensual. M.. more..

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