Begin

Begin

A Poem by Revery



Start at the beginning
or the bottom
or the end
but just
begin again

with

traces of past tethered
together from then till now

Just breath and be
and see from
the place of the living

Where lives are left to live
and grace is there to give

Simply because of who we are, 
as souls scarred with glory and sin.



© 2013 Revery



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"Just breath and be
and see from
the place of the living

Where lives are left to live
and grace is there to give

Simply because of who we are,
as souls scarred with glory and sin."

Oh my friend, this incredibly beautiful. Something I really wanted to read. :) I miss you!!


Posted 3 Years Ago


Revery

3 Years Ago

So glad this touched your soul dear Maya. Own that sense of dignity that comes from inside, that de.. read more
'Just breath and be' that's all that one can do. Beautifully written...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you SarahLin. :)
Onward and upward is the only way to go....through the bad times and the good times. Indeed, we may be scarred, but to sit in a corner and vegetate accomplishes nothing. Good life advice in this poem. Lydi*

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Scars will last and that's okay but the wounds must first heal for life to continue and for inspirat.. read more
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Pax
a wisdom that always drives us to move forward....
it's always so nice to read this...
thanks for sharing such insight my friend...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Pax, feeding my soul to see friends come by and support me.
raw and beautiful, inspiring us to begin.....again...anywhere...thank you :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Brigid. Nice to hear from you again.
Sometimes we can begin again...if life will let us. A new beginning can be the making of us, sometimes. Interesting words, making the reader think. ~ Robert.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sir.
You are a true poet, your heart has absorbed, experienced, released, and regained what matters most in life.
This reads with an effortless flow and tangible wisdom.... thank you for writing such an inspirational piece. Truly lovely. x :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Robbie, your reviews are always precious to me.
"traces of past tethered
together from then till now

Just breath and be "
I see traces of ancient wisdom tethered with hope of the future...Splendid...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sami, I'm honored by your review.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
It has been some time since I've read your work. Splendid read and write. Good to see you again.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Revery

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate you reading and commenting.
Brandon S. Whitten

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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I am a technical writing by profession. I'm in my mid-forties and married with three wonderful children. My poetry deals with the struggles and contrasts between the spiritual and the sensual. M.. more..

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